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Merlin
post Nov 22 09, 16:24
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Lament

How can a serious poet be
accepted by those erudites
who’ve reached an apogee in heights
and are much wiser than is he?

If learnéd I was as some folks,
my words would please, but woe-alas,
to scrutinizers they don’t pass,
becoming risible, quizzical jokes.

My situation is quite grim.
I’ve truly tried and studied hard
along this road to be a bard
but still my prominence stays dim.

A whiskered wizard I remain
with pen in hand to join the game
in search of promiscuity and fame
and overall, not go insane.



edit changed verse order switching 1 & 2


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Guest_Ellen_*
post Dec 10 09, 17:30
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Hello Merlin, LOL.gif

Well, it seems you found your claim to fame and 'promiscuity' too....being associated with ''Muktuk Annie''. dance.gif I remember when that song was popular here, way back when.

I tried reading this poem with the verses in their original order too. I must admit that this new version reads better. All in all, it is a delightful read!
 
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