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Nov 22 09, 16:24
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Lament
How can a serious poet be
accepted by those erudites
who’ve reached an apogee in heights
and are much wiser than is he?
If learnéd I was as some folks,
my words would please, but woe-alas,
to scrutinizers they don’t pass,
becoming risible, quizzical jokes.
My situation is quite grim.
I’ve truly tried and studied hard
along this road to be a bard
but still my prominence stays dim.
A whiskered wizard I remain
with pen in hand to join the game
in search of promiscuity and fame
and overall, not go insane.
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Dec 4 09, 04:46
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"in search of promiscuity"
The new John Donne perhaps?
The irony of this poem is that, despite the poet's protestations, the language has a decidedly scholarly air. I particularly liked the learned with the accent on the 'e'. Very nice.
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Merlin
Lament
Nov 22 09, 16:24
Merlin
In the event anyone is interested, I found this li...
Nov 22 09, 16:32
Mary Boren
Promiscuity? I think you're searching in th...
Nov 22 09, 16:36
jgdittier
Dear Merlin, If you feel a warm hand on your shoul...
Nov 23 09, 12:55
Merlin
Thank you for reading, Mary, Ron, and all ye spide...
Nov 23 09, 20:30
Ishmael
"in search of promiscuity" The new J...
Dec 4 09, 04:46
Merlin
Many thanks, Ishmael, it always pleases me when m...
Dec 5 09, 00:08
Sekhmet
Hello Merlin - since when has wisdom walked hand i...
Dec 10 09, 16:38
Ellen
Hello Merlin, Well, it seems you found your clai...
Dec 10 09, 17:30
Merlin
Thank you for your nice comments, Leo & Ellen....
Dec 10 09, 22:16
Sekhmet
Hi - I've just followed the link too, 'Muk...
Dec 11 09, 03:47
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