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 Nov 28 09, 00:31
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 Assyrian  Posts: 262 Joined: 4-February 09 Member No.: 756 Real Name: Robin DeWalt Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Winning Writer's web site  |
When my mother looked at me
her smile was wide but I could see it didn't graze her eyes. Much easier to bury seeds beyond the rake of therapy than ever question why. When my daughter looks at me my smile is wide but can she see it doesn't graze my eyes. ·······  ······· |
  
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Nov 28 09, 02:34
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear Merle,
This is very sad. Therapy has a lot to answer for. Sometimes it brings up value, but mostly jst stirs up. Do you mean graCe rather than graZe ? Love Alan ······· ······· |
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merle Reap What You Sow Nov 28 09, 00:31 
Mary Boren Merle (or may I call you by your real name?)
You... Nov 28 09, 15:32 merle Hi Alan & Mary - Sorry for the delay in my re... Nov 30 09, 19:35 Alan Dear Merle,
Here are the defs of graze from Rhyme... Dec 2 09, 03:39 merle Hi Alan -
Yep, those are the definitions. lol I ... Dec 2 09, 16:46 Sekhmet Hi Merle - Graze is good for me.
Graze can also m... Dec 12 09, 11:58 merle Ah! Interesting how one word works for one pe... Dec 12 09, 19:47 Sekhmet Hi Merle - The Brit Class System? In this case, no... Dec 13 09, 02:52 merle Oh dear me...I don't think I'll be traveli... Dec 14 09, 21:04 Larry Hi Merle,
Not being an expert on meter or rhyme, ... Dec 16 09, 22:17 
merle Hi Larry -
Thanks for the suggestions. I'll ... Dec 17 09, 18:10 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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