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LIGHT'S OUT, Irreverence

Alan View Member Profile Find Member's Posts	Aug 20 09, 02:27 Post #1
Laureate Legionnaire Group: Gold Member Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends	LIGHT’S OUT It was a wrench, at eight bells, to part from the wench when she went to the powder room to powder her nose - what a delicious idea - was not, I suppose easy, in the deepest of gloom The light bulb - and life’s - quite transient nature which causes much strife is not shielded from death’s dreaded doom Fate’s caught you off guard altogether that night clearly marked is your card : “there is, sadly, no in at the womb ...” Alan McAlpine Douglas Challenge words : wrench eight powder nose delicious transient bulb shield card together ·············· MM Award Winner

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Peterpan View Member Profile Find Member's Posts	Aug 20 09, 07:36 Post #2
Creative Chieftain Group: Gold Member Posts: 1,621 Joined: 18-August 05 From: Johannesburg, South Africa Member No.: 127 Real Name: Beverleigh Gail Annegarn Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Jox	Gee Alan, perhaps I am a bit confused here. Can it be 'no inn at the womb'?? Not sure I understand it all in totality. Working on the comprehension... Bev ·············· May the angels guide your light. MM Award Winner