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| Guest_alice_* |
 Jul 29 09, 05:12
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end of summer
in silence we share the last plum alice |
  
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| Guest_alice_* |
Jul 30 09, 08:54
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Hi ace, thanks so much for reading and commenting on my ku. I find 17 syls too long most of the time, but you never know, I may come up with one
 I like the sound of yours..especially: "The end of summer arrives in silence" I'd probably just tag on "juicy plums"The end of summer arrives in silence Juicy plums take care Alice |
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alice Haiku Jul 29 09, 05:12 
ace Alice:
Lovely image and a nice short poem. Wh... Jul 29 09, 17:44 hellfire hi alice
i think this piece speaks volumes with b... Jul 30 09, 07:32 alice Hellfire, appreciate your comments. yes, I believe... Jul 30 09, 08:57 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Alice44,
I enjoyed this haiku. I also don;t a... Aug 1 09, 08:09 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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