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 Jul 29 09, 05:12
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end of summer
in silence we share the last plum alice |
  
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Jul 30 09, 07:32
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 Babylonian  Posts: 66 Joined: 14-May 09 Member No.: 798 Real Name: James Carver Writer of: Poetry Referred By:poppy |
hi alice
i think this piece speaks volumes with beautifull imagery that is heartfelt.loved it regarding the format,the syllable structure is allowed to be less than 17 as far as i know. cheers hellfire |
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alice Haiku Jul 29 09, 05:12 
ace Alice:
Lovely image and a nice short poem. Wh... Jul 29 09, 17:44 alice Hi ace, thanks so much for reading and commenting ... Jul 30 09, 08:54 alice Hellfire, appreciate your comments. yes, I believe... Jul 30 09, 08:57 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Alice44,
I enjoyed this haiku. I also don;t a... Aug 1 09, 08:09 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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