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 Jul 29 09, 05:12
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end of summer
in silence we share the last plum alice |
  
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Jul 29 09, 17:44
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Babylonian  Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty |
Alice:
Lovely image and a nice short poem. Whether it is a haiku or not is probably open to debate. I believe haiku's have a 5-7-5 rhythm. Something like: the end of summer arrives in silence; we share the juicy last plus. Still these are nice lines. In fact they are better than mine. ace |
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alice Haiku Jul 29 09, 05:12 
hellfire hi alice
i think this piece speaks volumes with b... Jul 30 09, 07:32 alice Hi ace, thanks so much for reading and commenting ... Jul 30 09, 08:54 alice Hellfire, appreciate your comments. yes, I believe... Jul 30 09, 08:57 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Alice44,
I enjoyed this haiku. I also don;t a... Aug 1 09, 08:09 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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