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 Greek  Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in  |
Decommissioned (Revision 1)
A mosquito out searching for blood spied a farm's prize thoroughbred stud. She bit him in a place that was a disgrace. Henceforth he was just known as "Dud." Peggy Carpenter Harwood Decommissioned A mosquito out searching for blood spied a farm's prize thoroughbred stud. She bit him in a place that was a disgrace. Henceforth he was simply known as "Dud." Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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Jul 5 09, 16:29
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 Babylonian Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty |
Peggy: I've meant to tell you I enjoyed this for several days, but have had log in problems. I an a limerick fan, although I haven't written many. One thought...would the last line be better rhythmicall as... Henceforth he was just known as "Dud:. Eliminates one syllable. ace |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Decommissioned (Revision1) Jul 2 09, 11:37 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Ace,
Thanks so much for reading!! I... Jul 5 09, 16:43 ohsteve Peggy, I have read this several times, laughed, ch... Jul 5 09, 23:06 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Steve,
Ha!! Glad you read!!... Jul 6 09, 05:31 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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