Dear Ishmael, I'm the neighborhood "sing-song" reader and so, being out of sync with modern methods, my comment isn't likely to be all that helpful. As a verser rather than a poet, I'm mechanical and though I appreciate the imagery, I too would benefit from more punctuation as I care greatly that what I write is read the way I hope for it. Thus I'm occasionally reminded that I use too much punctuation. More important than anything already covered, I'm curious and wonder what are your reasons for avoiding punctuation. I'm also one who appreciates footnote explanations as to the writer's techniques and words/phrases that we may fail to understand. Cheers, Ron jgdittier
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