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Real Name: Peggy Harwood
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Heralds of Springtime (Revision 2)
Pear blossom petals dapple young sprouting grasses, heralds of springtime.
Peggy Carpenter Harwood
Classic Spring Heralds (Revision 1)
Pear blossom petals dapple young sprouting grasses, classic spring heralds.
Peggy Carpenter Harwood
The Heralds of Spring (Original)
Pear blossom petals dapple young sprouting grasses, the heralds of spring.
Peggy, I understand why John might have wanted it change to singular but "petals, and grasses are plural and I feel 'heralds' should be plural too... don't know... I am not an english major...lol