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 Jan 28 09, 23:20
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Opposites Attract
Does warmth ever make you cold? Does fear ever make you bold? They say opposites attract and on each other react just like spores and food make mold! Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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Jan 29 09, 16:20
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Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi PB,
I chose to use present tense verbs rather than past tense verbs, so I used "does" instead of your "did." As for line four being forced, I was trying to finish showing the relationship and leading into the reaction shown in line five. Peggy ······· ······· |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Opposites Attract Jan 28 09, 23:20 
prerna bala QUOTE (Peggy Carpenter Harwood @ Jan 29 09, 0... Jan 29 09, 15:39 ohsteve Peggy, This does not strike me as a limerick, firs... Jan 29 09, 20:32 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Thanks Steve!! I'll just re-label it... Jan 29 09, 20:43 Mostafa Youssef I liked the idea, I will not call it as a poem or ... Jan 13 10, 17:49 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Mustafa,
Welcome to Mosaic Musings!!... Jan 15 10, 08:49 Thoth Hi Peggy,
I liked the idea of this one, especiall... Jan 16 10, 12:52 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Wally,
Sorry I took so long to get back to you... Feb 15 10, 10:33 4rum I do like limericks and when I took the time to re... Mar 31 10, 09:18 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi rum,
I like your handle! Rum is quite a f... Mar 31 10, 10:41 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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