QUOTE (Peggy Carpenter Harwood @ Jan 29 09, 05:20 )
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Opposites Attract
Does warmth ever make you cold?
Does fear ever make you bold?
They say opposites attract
and on each other react
just like spores and food make mold!
Peggy Carpenter Harwood
hi Peggy, why do you choose to say " Does warmth ever make you cold ?" instead of "Did warmth ever make you cold / or fear ever make you bold ...
also line four seems forced to me, what do you think?