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Maggie
post Dec 23 08, 14:47
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Abelard's Passion (Revision 2)

Ignorance castrates,
but passion is forever,
beyond death itself.

Peggy Carpenter Harwood



Abelard's Passion (Revision 1)

Hate castrated him,
but passion is forever-
beyond death itself.

Peggy Carpenter Harwood




Abelard's Passion

Evil castrates him,
but passion is forever-
beyond death itself.

Peggy Carpenter Harwood


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post Jan 9 09, 13:07
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Peggy, a very interesting story, seems like there would be more than a senryu in all that. Good Short piece though.
Steve
 
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