Hi Ron, he actually steals one from Rooster when R is snoozing.
Hello Jax,
Thank you for your insight and commenting.
I’ll concede that L6 S2 will be a problem and an adjustment is necessary. Before going with it, I did consult Answers.com, who list 3 definitions for both phantom & incubus. They can be, but need not be the same. However, since the natural conclusion will be a ghost, and since that does require explanation, it’s not right.
Your other points >>>
It seems accentual trimeter Meter is varied, made to fit the presentation instead of following any set standard.
Can a screech careen Yes, if it’s bouncing off walls.
Using twi-lit would clash with twilight right below it.
“where twilight shelters me where the poltergeist appears” Hmmm – wears out the wheres, dontcha think? Do poltergeists have footsteps? Is it the poltergeist making the footsteps?
You feel a draft?
Merlin
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