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| Guest_Xanadu_* |
 Nov 30 07, 14:37
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The pipes are clanging
The washer`s banging out an overload opus. The neighbors bitchin` at your kids screamin` through the halls, cause it`s a snow day. Your last cigarette curls white rings around high school memories; senior pictures smudged n`, suspended in smoke. This post has been edited by Xanadu: Dec 5 07, 18:00 |
  
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| Guest_Xanadu_* |
Dec 1 07, 10:51
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Thanks Alan. I knew I had been instructed to add something, somewhere. I figured it would all come out in the wash. LOL
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Xanadu A Little Travelin` Music.... Nov 30 07, 14:37 
Alan Dear X,
definitely has the makings. Some thoughts... Nov 30 07, 16:04 Xanadu Thank you for pointing our my boo boos. I`ll r... Nov 30 07, 20:21 Alan Dear Linda,
Aha, now I see the "suspended... Dec 1 07, 02:54 
Xanadu I did some editing on this when I realized that I ... Dec 5 07, 18:04 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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