Words [Rev 2, 27 Oct], Rhyme in Heptameter Options

[Larry]

Revision #2 (thanks to Mary, Merlin & Amythyst)

Words

Strange lines, woven together in an odd, haphazard way,
are writhing on with twists and turns. Across the centuries
they’re painted, coarsely carved in caves; all meaning lost today,
or finely penned on parchment in precise calligraphy‘s

revealing goodness, evil, love or hatred, truth or lies;
reside where they’re ensconced, awaiting one who understands.
When heralding a birth or etched in stone at one’s demise,
each line is new. Though used before by many different hands;

they’re easily affordable to paupers and to kings.
The cost is naught but knowledge of their structure and portent.
Lines neither know the smiles or tears their convolution brings,
nor wait, with baited breath, returns, from where they’re sometimes sent.

From animal caricatures to geometric forms,
these lines give meaning to a thought, a way, a time or place.
Linguistically elusive, yet their shape, like mother’s arms;
when understood, brings to the mind the Words in warm embrace.

Dedicated to Wordsmiths everywhere and everywhen.

[Merlin]

Hi again, Larry,

Tis I once again. Let me attack V1, since the beginning is most important anywhere, and I feel yours needs a bit more work. I get lost completely with the semis, so lets park them, ok.

The lines, all strung together in a strange haphazard way
are writhing on with twists and turns across the centuries;
from coarsely carved within a cave, their meaning lost today;
to finely penned on parchment in precise calligraphy's.

Why don't you say, The lines, all strung together in a strange, haphazard way are writhing on with twists and turns across the centuries, from coarsely carved to finely penned, their meaning lost today, inside a cave on parchments in precise calligraphy.

Looking at it this way,
The lines, all strung together in a strange, haphazard way
are writhing on with twists and turns across the centuries,
from coarsely carved to finely penned, their meaning lost today,
inside a cave on parchments in precise calligraphy.

It would be "calligraphies", but since it is already a word describing multiple things, (like family, group, herd, etc) plural isn't necessary. For this reader, I'll gladly allow that slant rhyme to pass. You do have a poetic license, don't you?

There tis

Merlin