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Kay
post Aug 9 07, 07:33
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She makes love to me everyday.
We become a cross. Other times, a roasting spit.
When she slips inside, I am a pink melon,
asking for a kiss to bruise the gods.

My belly feels light. I remember being eleven,
and kneeling at the feet of Our Lady of Guadalupe--
praying for breasts, for the map of a man.

Then, I found her:
soft around the mouth;
she leaves a flutter in my ribs,
a ghost under the eaves.


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Merlin
post Aug 12 07, 23:26
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Hello Kay,

You've enlightened me on a couple of positions I've not tried before. The pink melon is good, but the cross and roasting spit sound like fun.

Give my regards to the Lady.

Merlin


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