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Posted on: Jun 12 12, 11:22 |
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(just having a little fun with Merlin's Sinfully... rhyme for rhyme. F)
The name just dawned on me, Vanilla Light! Pursued, I nearly rimmed him ‘round the bend; and, in the abstract, I can’t comprehend why housekeeping deserves to bear such plights. The way some boys will drink and so ignite such veiled, veneered, false passion! To what end? We’re here to clean; such sin phonies won't mend their drowned out sorrows, sinking out of sight.
The whine and flow of fervour’s talk will tick off any maid who, pushed against the wall, is saavy to the depths of drunken gloom. He danced with my zoom broom until he tricked the other girl with Odes to Joy so tall I, later, circled back and did the room.
MFK Buckley
flow abstract tick maid drown name bend veneer rim dawn
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Posted on: Apr 7 12, 22:52 |
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Inspired by a pair staring skyward on the beach together with a lovely line that seemed to hover just above them... F
The Birders
That love at length should find me out and bring* a fleeting insight, so far, out of reach. Assumptions have obscured the nub of things, and why I called to see you on the beach. That love is everything’s not quite my line. Such notions recommend we count in twos, and lists of soloists as such are fine if tandems are not something one pursues.
I’ve never had a fear of flying, urged, I cast myself on crosswinds. Wanting more, my memories of flights of fancy merged. Remember being out here once before? We watched as Arctic geese took flight; a pair had made you wish you had a mate somewhere.
MFK Buckley
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