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Haiku is one of the most important forms of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.
Haiku (in English) usually appears as an unrhymed three-line verse. It should balance intense, fragmentary imagery with stress on rhythm and sound. Though it can be presented in three lines, a haiku structurally consists of two parts with a pause in between. The power behind it derives from the juxtaposition of the two images and the sense of surprise or revelation that the second image produces. A good haiku is like a good joke: the set-up, then the punch line.
In the broadest sense,Haiku is about Nature. In Japan, most haiku have a season word (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, New Years) that links the poem with the vast, archetypal round of the Year of Life. Today, in place of the season word, some contemporary haiku poets use keywords that express common themes of human experience (for example, "mother"). This, however, is a matter of controversy in modern haiku.
Some examples of tradition Haiku are listed below by Japanese Poet, Kobayashi Issa for you to enjoy.
in falling rain one man remains... blossom shade
the cherry blossoms that stirred me, shade me no more
through falling snow a spring breeze blows
have you come to save us haiku poets? red dragonfly
Please feel free to add to this thread your own haiku.. Mosaic Musings Staff
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Cleo_Serapis Haiku Aug 3 03, 16:40 Dear Cleo
Ha, I have a problem : My haiku, while ... Oct 28 03, 10:17 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 28 2003, 10:17)Dear Cleo
... Oct 28 03, 10:42 Cybele Having started writing Haiku, I now can't stop... Oct 28 03, 11:20 Dear Grace
"I now can't stop... help!... Oct 28 03, 11:59 Michelle James, thank you for the information. I had no i... Oct 28 03, 12:37 Cybele Hello Michelle,
Such a wonderful mind picture. I... Oct 28 03, 13:04 Cybele Hello Alan
Thank you. I never could disti... Oct 28 03, 13:10 Dear Grace
"I never could distinguish between shi... Oct 28 03, 17:47 Brahms New pasture bride-way
600 foot mud puppies
from we... Oct 28 03, 16:14 Dear Brahms
Not being in the least a country boy,... Oct 28 03, 17:53 Cleo_Serapis Merging into HAIKU thread.....
Nicely done! Oct 28 03, 18:14 JustDaniel Hey, Grace, you're a natural! Sorry I... Oct 29 03, 08:04 WASTE, OR WAIST ?
Hallowe'en's over:
Tric... Nov 2 03, 14:02 JustDaniel fall of dignity
trees refuse to leave;
they’ll ca... Nov 3 03, 03:39 JustDaniel fall beclouds
shadowing daylight,
then reigning o... Nov 6 03, 15:15 Cybele December roses
brave the kiss of falling snow
with... Nov 8 03, 00:27 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 23:27)December ... Nov 8 03, 09:32 Cleo_Serapis Nice reading in here!
OK - I'll try one!
Whis... Nov 9 03, 08:41 Cybele QUOTE Whispers of the wind
waltz in perfect unison... Nov 9 03, 09:26 JustDaniel sign: Custard's Last Stand
ice cream drive-in ... Nov 10 03, 01:48 JustDaniel mirrors
wakened, squinting eyes’
vengeful mourni... Nov 12 03, 02:25 Cybele unmourned, with throats cut
on the fresh-m... Nov 30 03, 08:48 JustDaniel How un-Graceful, Cybele!
poetic just is
s... Nov 30 03, 13:00 Cybele Hi Daniel,
Sorry, I just always feel so sorry for... Nov 30 03, 13:36 Cybele on the log cabin
ice crystals hanging from eaves
... Dec 1 03, 08:29 JustDaniel jack’s flap house crystal
in jack’s Log Cabin
cry... Dec 1 03, 14:00 Cybele my head tilted back
to catch raindrops on my chee... Dec 6 03, 03:41 JustDaniel Hi, Grace! Lovely, indeed!
When you post... Dec 18 03, 18:10 Cybele Good Morning Daniel,
How lovely to hear from you... Dec 19 03, 01:17 Dear Grace
Quite lovely !
Lets see if I can ... Dec 19 03, 02:34 Cybele Good Morning Alan,
Great response!
WHIM... Dec 19 03, 03:13 Jox Hi Grace,
unmourned, with throats cut
on the fr... Dec 19 03, 03:42 JustDaniel Agreeing with James' assessment...
we now mov... Dec 26 03, 12:19 Cybele still wrapped in your love
tears dry on my cheeks,... Jan 11 04, 05:06 Dear Grace
Loved the haiku, and can respond with ... Jan 11 04, 05:32 Cybele Good Sir Knight
Thank you for your empathy and ... Jan 11 04, 06:08 Cybele albino badger
viewed in a floodlit garden;
crunche... Jan 14 04, 03:40 JustDaniel if you'll pardon an askew senryu...
painting ... Jan 16 04, 21:34 Cybele Good Morning Daniel,
A very vivid picture indeed.... Jan 17 04, 02:26 Cleo_Serapis Warm sun glistens frost
on a brisk morning of hope... Jan 17 04, 08:56 JustDaniel Interactive Haiku, anyone?
Millie the farm horse
... Jan 18 04, 04:45 Dear Daniel
can you feel the air?
it’s glistering... Jan 18 04, 04:54 JustDaniel QUOTE (Alan @ Jan. 18 2004, 03:54)Dear Daniel... Jan 18 04, 07:24 Dear Daniel
You had me LOLling about "! A wha... Jan 18 04, 07:32 Cybele Dear Daniel,
Not to spoil your initiative. Just... Jan 18 04, 07:45 Cleo_Serapis OOOhhhhhhhh
This looks fun!
Ok:
in the hu... Jan 18 04, 08:54 JustDaniel Pineys: Thanks fer coat!
collar always in yer ... Jan 18 04, 17:18 Cybele Hi Daniel,
Still not able to think of witty follo... Jan 19 04, 03:02 JustDaniel Well!!! I never! Moon us, w... Jan 21 04, 07:13 Cybele onslaught of winter
sprinkle of fine dandruff;
the... Jan 22 04, 03:06 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 22 2004, 02:06)
onslaugh... Jan 22 04, 04:51 Dove The sweetness of full,
orange nectarines turns pur... Jan 24 04, 18:01 JustDaniel Con sensual
Lust posing as love
turning a world i... Jan 27 04, 09:01 Cybele winter stars glitter. .
sailor blows warmth in cu... Jan 28 04, 03:45 Dove Purple violets
are warmed by children's laught... Jan 28 04, 15:04 Cleo_Serapis Flakes fall ubiased
sprinkling kisses of cool love... Jan 28 04, 20:38 Cybele Good Morning Dove and Cleo,
Two lovely pieces, ... Jan 29 04, 01:42 Athena Delightful, Grace!
Won't you come and tr... Jan 29 04, 02:05 Cybele Hello Dolly,
Thank you for your kind words. ... Jan 30 04, 02:07 Cybele the snow covered roof
of the garden bird table;
ro... Jan 30 04, 03:35 Athena After The Snow
the showers pour down
cleansing th... Jan 31 04, 06:32 Cybele serene winter evening
moonbeams inch across my cha... Feb 7 04, 02:10 Dear Grace
The serenity shines through, quiet (I ... Feb 7 04, 02:39 Athena Oh Lady Grace,
This poem is marvelously full of p... Feb 7 04, 03:11 Cybele Hello Dolly and Good Sir Knight
Thank you fo... Feb 7 04, 03:34 PROGRESS REPORT
She's talking at last !
P... Feb 7 04, 04:17 Cybele Good Sir Knight,
Great piece Alan - and oh! s... Feb 7 04, 12:17 Cybele lacy tracery
winter skeletons of trees;
a Robin ch... Feb 8 04, 04:22 Haiku - ETERNAL HARBINGER
A robin chirrups
in ble... Feb 8 04, 04:34 Cybele captured by headlights
hailstones click on the win... Feb 10 04, 13:42 Athena when doves flying low
watch windshield very closel... Feb 13 04, 01:56 oskarthethird Haiku (sea)
When dust of sunlight
Settles on the... Feb 9 04, 03:56 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (oskarthethird @ Feb. 09 2004, 03:56)Ha... Feb 13 04, 12:53 Athena I've really enjoyed reading all these lovely h... Feb 14 04, 04:47 Cybele Oh Dolly! How sad!
unblemished white la... Feb 14 04, 05:18 Athena Yes Grace, I see that!
This one is r... Feb 14 04, 05:22 Cybele pricked by a sharp thorn;
blood drips on the pure ... Feb 15 04, 04:34 Cybele lace-edged waves stealing
kisses from the golden s... Feb 18 04, 02:54 Dear Grace
WOW what an image - didn't know I ... Feb 18 04, 02:58 Cybele Good morning good Sir Knight,
Ah! There... Feb 18 04, 03:57 JustDaniel Good night, Ms Morning… it’s in all of us!
... Feb 18 04, 05:37 Cybele Hi Daniel
QUOTE winter warm-up
white sheet co... Feb 19 04, 12:27 JustDaniel Thank you, Grace. Very nice piece here...
and I ... Feb 19 04, 17:36 Athena Oh, Daniel, that one is cute! Funny! I t... Feb 20 04, 01:58 Cybele Hello Dolly,
Very nice thought. Idle on the outsi... Feb 20 04, 04:27 Cybele Good Morning Daniel,
Oh! that puppy!... Feb 20 04, 04:31 JustDaniel Hey, Dolly and Grace!
Great stuff... and look... Feb 20 04, 10:19 Cybele Hello Daniel,
Love the last line Shame it doesn... Feb 21 04, 04:18 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Feb. 21 2004, 03:18)Hello Dan... Feb 21 04, 04:56 Cybele Oh Daniel,
QUOTE silly wet heron
stands ... Feb 21 04, 08:24 Athena Heyyyy Everyone ..... these haiku are super! ... Feb 22 04, 03:00 Cybele Hello Dolly,
A truly lovely piece with great imag... Feb 24 04, 02:50 Athena Oh Grace,
I LOVE your haiku!! What a tho... Feb 25 04, 00:56 Cybele Hello Dolly
I heard you were dead;
knew rumors... Feb 25 04, 02:08 Dove Open night sky floats
and is bleached haphazardly
... Mar 12 04, 04:08 Athena The Good Ol' Days
Shopping for our needs
brin... Mar 13 04, 03:09 Cybele into the limelight;
enthusiastic stampede
small ba... Mar 14 04, 03:25 Cybele Hi Dolly
may shadows never
darken the joy in ... Mar 14 04, 03:28 Dear Grace,
I know this is not interactice, but i... Mar 14 04, 03:35 Athena Thank you so much, Lady Grace! What a neat ha... Mar 14 04, 17:31
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