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Haiku is one of the most important forms of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.

Haiku (in English) usually appears as an unrhymed three-line verse. It should balance intense, fragmentary imagery with stress on rhythm and sound. Though it can be presented in three lines, a haiku structurally consists of two parts with a pause in between. The power behind it derives from the juxtaposition of the two images and the sense of surprise or revelation that the second image produces. A good haiku is like a good joke: the set-up, then the punch line.

In the broadest sense,Haiku is about Nature. In Japan, most haiku have a season word (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, New Years) that links the poem with the vast, archetypal round of the Year of Life. Today, in place of the season word, some contemporary haiku poets use keywords that express common themes of human experience (for example, "mother"). This, however, is a matter of controversy in modern haiku.

Some examples of tradition Haiku are listed below by Japanese Poet, Kobayashi Issa for you to enjoy.

in falling rain
one man remains...
blossom shade

the cherry blossoms
that stirred me, shade me
no more

through falling snow
a spring breeze
blows

have you come
to save us haiku poets?
red dragonfly



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- Cleo_Serapis   Haiku   Aug 3 03, 16:40
- -   Dear Cleo Ha, I have a problem : My haiku, while ...   Oct 28 03, 10:17
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 28 2003, 10:17)Dear Cleo ...   Oct 28 03, 10:42
- - Cybele   Having started writing Haiku, I now can't stop...   Oct 28 03, 11:20
- -   Dear Grace "I now can't stop... help!...   Oct 28 03, 11:59
- - Michelle   James,  thank you for the information.  I had no i...   Oct 28 03, 12:37
- - Cybele   Hello Michelle, Such a wonderful mind picture.  I...   Oct 28 03, 13:04
- - Cybele   Hello Alan Thank you.  I never could disti...   Oct 28 03, 13:10
- -   Dear Grace "I never could distinguish between shi...   Oct 28 03, 17:47
- - Brahms   New pasture bride-way 600 foot mud puppies from we...   Oct 28 03, 16:14
- -   Dear Brahms Not being in the least a country boy,...   Oct 28 03, 17:53
- - Cleo_Serapis   Merging into HAIKU thread..... Nicely done!   Oct 28 03, 18:14
- - JustDaniel   Hey, Grace, you're a natural!  Sorry I...   Oct 29 03, 08:04
- -   WASTE, OR WAIST ? Hallowe'en's over: Tric...   Nov 2 03, 14:02
- - JustDaniel   fall of dignity trees refuse to leave; they’ll ca...   Nov 3 03, 03:39
- - JustDaniel   fall beclouds shadowing daylight, then reigning o...   Nov 6 03, 15:15
- - Cybele   December roses brave the kiss of falling snow with...   Nov 8 03, 00:27
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 07 2003, 23:27)December ...   Nov 8 03, 09:32
- - Cleo_Serapis   Nice reading in here!   OK - I'll try one! Whis...   Nov 9 03, 08:41
- - Cybele   QUOTE Whispers of the wind waltz in perfect unison...   Nov 9 03, 09:26
- - JustDaniel   sign: Custard's Last Stand ice cream drive-in ...   Nov 10 03, 01:48
- - JustDaniel   mirrors wakened, squinting eyes’ vengeful mourni...   Nov 12 03, 02:25
- - Cybele   unmourned,  with throats cut on the fresh-m...   Nov 30 03, 08:48
- - JustDaniel   How un-Graceful, Cybele!   poetic just is s...   Nov 30 03, 13:00
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, Sorry, I just always feel so sorry for...   Nov 30 03, 13:36
- - Cybele   on the log cabin ice crystals hanging from eaves ...   Dec 1 03, 08:29
- - JustDaniel   jack’s flap house crystal in jack’s Log Cabin cry...   Dec 1 03, 14:00
- - Cybele   my head tilted back to catch  raindrops on my chee...   Dec 6 03, 03:41
- - JustDaniel   Hi, Grace!  Lovely, indeed! When you post...   Dec 18 03, 18:10
- - Cybele   Good Morning Daniel, How lovely to hear from you...   Dec 19 03, 01:17
- -   Dear Grace Quite lovely ! Lets see if I can ...   Dec 19 03, 02:34
- - Cybele   Good Morning Alan, Great response!   WHIM...   Dec 19 03, 03:13
- - Jox   Hi Grace, unmourned,  with throats cut on the fr...   Dec 19 03, 03:42
- - JustDaniel   Agreeing with James' assessment... we now mov...   Dec 26 03, 12:19
- - Cybele   still wrapped in your love tears dry on my cheeks,...   Jan 11 04, 05:06
- -   Dear Grace Loved the haiku, and can respond with ...   Jan 11 04, 05:32
- - Cybele   Good Sir Knight Thank you for your empathy and ...   Jan 11 04, 06:08
- - Cybele   albino badger viewed in a floodlit garden; crunche...   Jan 14 04, 03:40
- - JustDaniel   if you'll pardon an askew senryu... painting ...   Jan 16 04, 21:34
- - Cybele   Good Morning Daniel, A very vivid picture indeed....   Jan 17 04, 02:26
- - Cleo_Serapis   Warm sun glistens frost on a brisk morning of hope...   Jan 17 04, 08:56
- - JustDaniel   Interactive Haiku, anyone? Millie the farm horse ...   Jan 18 04, 04:45
- -   Dear Daniel can you feel the air? it’s glistering...   Jan 18 04, 04:54
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Alan @ Jan. 18 2004, 03:54)Dear Daniel...   Jan 18 04, 07:24
- -   Dear Daniel You had me LOLling about "! A wha...   Jan 18 04, 07:32
- - Cybele   Dear Daniel, Not to spoil your initiative. Just...   Jan 18 04, 07:45
- - Cleo_Serapis   OOOhhhhhhhh   This looks fun!   Ok: in the hu...   Jan 18 04, 08:54
- - JustDaniel   Pineys: Thanks fer coat! collar always in yer ...   Jan 18 04, 17:18
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel, Still not able to think of witty follo...   Jan 19 04, 03:02
- - JustDaniel   Well!!!  I never!  Moon us, w...   Jan 21 04, 07:13
- - Cybele   onslaught of winter sprinkle of fine dandruff; the...   Jan 22 04, 03:06
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Jan. 22 2004, 02:06) onslaugh...   Jan 22 04, 04:51
- - Dove   The sweetness of full, orange nectarines turns pur...   Jan 24 04, 18:01
- - JustDaniel   Con sensual Lust posing as love turning a world i...   Jan 27 04, 09:01
- - Cybele   winter stars glitter. . sailor blows warmth in cu...   Jan 28 04, 03:45
- - Dove   Purple violets are warmed by children's laught...   Jan 28 04, 15:04
- - Cleo_Serapis   Flakes fall ubiased sprinkling kisses of cool love...   Jan 28 04, 20:38
- - Cybele   Good Morning Dove and Cleo, Two lovely pieces, ...   Jan 29 04, 01:42
- - Athena   Delightful, Grace! Won't you come and tr...   Jan 29 04, 02:05
- - Cybele   Hello Dolly, Thank you for your kind words. ...   Jan 30 04, 02:07
- - Cybele   the snow covered roof of the garden bird table; ro...   Jan 30 04, 03:35
- - Athena   After The Snow the showers pour down cleansing th...   Jan 31 04, 06:32
- - Cybele   serene winter evening moonbeams inch across my cha...   Feb 7 04, 02:10
- -   Dear Grace The serenity shines through, quiet (I ...   Feb 7 04, 02:39
- - Athena   Oh Lady Grace, This poem is marvelously full of p...   Feb 7 04, 03:11
- - Cybele   Hello Dolly    and Good Sir Knight Thank you fo...   Feb 7 04, 03:34
- -   PROGRESS REPORT She's talking at last ! P...   Feb 7 04, 04:17
- - Cybele   Good Sir Knight, Great piece Alan - and oh! s...   Feb 7 04, 12:17
- - Cybele   lacy tracery winter skeletons of trees; a Robin ch...   Feb 8 04, 04:22
- -   Haiku - ETERNAL HARBINGER A robin chirrups in ble...   Feb 8 04, 04:34
- - Cybele   captured by headlights hailstones click on the win...   Feb 10 04, 13:42
- - Athena   when doves flying low watch windshield very closel...   Feb 13 04, 01:56
- - oskarthethird   Haiku (sea) When dust of sunlight Settles on the...   Feb 9 04, 03:56
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (oskarthethird @ Feb. 09 2004, 03:56)Ha...   Feb 13 04, 12:53
- - Athena   I've really enjoyed reading all these lovely h...   Feb 14 04, 04:47
- - Cybele   Oh Dolly! How sad!  unblemished white la...   Feb 14 04, 05:18
- - Athena   Yes Grace, I see that!   This one is r...   Feb 14 04, 05:22
- - Cybele   pricked by a sharp thorn; blood drips on the pure ...   Feb 15 04, 04:34
- - Cybele   lace-edged waves stealing kisses from the golden s...   Feb 18 04, 02:54
- -   Dear Grace WOW what an image - didn't know I ...   Feb 18 04, 02:58
- - Cybele   Good morning good Sir Knight, Ah! There...   Feb 18 04, 03:57
- - JustDaniel   Good night,   Ms Morning… it’s in all of us! ...   Feb 18 04, 05:37
- - Cybele   Hi Daniel QUOTE winter warm-up white sheet co...   Feb 19 04, 12:27
- - JustDaniel   Thank you, Grace.  Very nice piece here... and I ...   Feb 19 04, 17:36
- - Athena   Oh, Daniel, that one is cute!  Funny!  I t...   Feb 20 04, 01:58
- - Cybele   Hello Dolly, Very nice thought. Idle on the outsi...   Feb 20 04, 04:27
- - Cybele   Good Morning Daniel, Oh! that puppy!...   Feb 20 04, 04:31
- - JustDaniel   Hey, Dolly and Grace! Great stuff... and look...   Feb 20 04, 10:19
- - Cybele   Hello Daniel, Love the last line Shame it doesn...   Feb 21 04, 04:18
- - JustDaniel   QUOTE (Cybele @ Feb. 21 2004, 03:18)Hello Dan...   Feb 21 04, 04:56
- - Cybele   Oh Daniel,   QUOTE silly wet  heron stands ...   Feb 21 04, 08:24
- - Athena   Heyyyy Everyone ..... these haiku are super!  ...   Feb 22 04, 03:00
- - Cybele   Hello Dolly, A truly lovely piece with great imag...   Feb 24 04, 02:50
- - Athena   Oh Grace, I LOVE your haiku!!  What a tho...   Feb 25 04, 00:56
- - Cybele   Hello Dolly I heard you were dead; knew rumors...   Feb 25 04, 02:08
- - Dove   Open night sky floats and is bleached haphazardly ...   Mar 12 04, 04:08
- - Athena   The Good Ol' Days Shopping for our needs brin...   Mar 13 04, 03:09
- - Cybele   into the limelight; enthusiastic stampede small ba...   Mar 14 04, 03:25
- - Cybele   Hi Dolly   may shadows never darken the joy in ...   Mar 14 04, 03:28
- -   Dear Grace, I know this is not interactice, but i...   Mar 14 04, 03:35
- - Athena   Thank you so much, Lady Grace!  What a neat ha...   Mar 14 04, 17:31
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