RC,
I'm drawn to the structural difference between the stanzas. 2 + 5 are more observational and centered on analogy. The others focus on feeling and experience between beings. It may have been the order of things but I cannot say it is reflection. Maybe it is multiple experiences or people. The more I look at the progression, the more I like it: Pensive eyes, mist, gravitas, bewilderment, anguish, sea showers. 6 stages of betrayal.
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