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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Weekly Challenges -> Acropolis _ Quiet Friends ~ ~ a Nonet

Posted by: JustDaniel Nov 15 17, 11:53

Quiet Friends

one
moment
since my fall
and all laughter
turns to a whisper
as my friends discover
me flat on my back; they wrap
my aching, swollen ankle, transport
me to where my soul can rest in dreams

Challenge words, in order of appearance: moment, fall, laughter, whisper, friend(s), discover, wrap, ach(ing), soul, dream(s)

Posted by: Larry Nov 15 17, 14:22

Hi Daniel,

Nicely done on the Nonet. Hope the fall hasn't happened recently.

Too bad you couldn't have made it a double acrostic Nonet. That would definitely have been a challenge.

Larry