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 Sep 29 10, 00:19
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 8,861 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting  |
(Just out of the oven. Had to write something to get worse thoughts out of my head..)
Go… slip into your familiar fiefdom sealed to me; I’ll say adios now –to my feelings not you- as I release your angel arm, admitting the unattainable. Go with your peers through nether portals of the mind, stranger than witchcraft. Dark shores bordering lightness! Maybe I too will traverse their sands, beyond reason, more cryptic than art or the poetic word. My goodbye is irreversible. You’ll not know me if I, too, plummet into improvident spans. Today I can only sit by you, disregarding your prattle, valuing nothing, yet confident of some sheltering empathy in the synchronicity of our lives. Go before I burst out crying for the self I loved in you; stumble off as if nothing happened, when everything has happened! Grope your droll road to baffling echelons with their odd laws -everything has laws, even lunacy- I’ll not browbeat you back into this world tagged normal. Set off now! It’s time to let go… By Psyche © Sylvia Evelyn, Buenos Aires, Argentina, 2010. All rights reserved. ·······  ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
  
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Oct 30 10, 21:56
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Sylvia, A very moving piece, I have read it twice and still I cannot find fault with it. I hope that your times of trouble will finally stop now.
You Take care it is really great to see your writing back on the boards, Hugs Steve |
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Nov 11 10, 23:36
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 8,861 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Dear Steve, I'm glad you find this piece moving. No nits??!! LOL.....but OK. I've been reading about your own health troubles, Steve, and I sincerely hope you'll feel better soon. It's amazing how you keep writing better & better poetry in spite of feeling wobbly. I admire you so much...wow...  You take care too. I'm trying to get back in the forums, but stuff piles up and makes my Muse glum...  Hugs, Syl***  QUOTE (ohsteve @ Oct 31 10, 04:56 )  Sylvia, A very moving piece, I have read it twice and still I cannot find fault with it. I hope that your times of trouble will finally stop now. You Take care it is really great to see your writing back on the boards, Hugs Steve ······· ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner |
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Psyche Doubtful Directives Sep 29 10, 00:19 
Alan Dear Sylvia,
Moving.
Can't say too much more... Sep 29 10, 00:40 
Psyche Dear Alan,
I apologise sincerely for not having r... Oct 28 10, 22:48 Eisa Oh Syl! - this is so moving!
Well, they c... Oct 1 10, 13:43 Psyche Dear Snow!
I'm finally catching up on my ... Oct 28 10, 23:10 Eisa Hi Syl
It's so good seeing you feel well enou... Oct 29 10, 14:47 Psyche Hi Eira
Thanks so much for reading me again. I do... Oct 29 10, 23:14 Eisa QUOTE (Psyche @ Oct 30 10, 05:14 ) Hi Eir... Oct 30 10, 17:01 Psyche Hi Snow!
Thanks so much for returning with a ... Nov 11 10, 23:30 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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