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 Nov 27 15, 13:09
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 Babylonian  Posts: 78 Joined: 13-November 15 Member No.: 5,294 Real Name: Krista van der Steen Writer of: Poetry  |
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The relish of silence, of quiet furniture in wait before the act of violence occurs, a fate that cannot be absolved. A use, a switch flicked, a force to be involved in which they feel tricked into participation of existence, of a share in accommodation, a nerve laid bare as unspeaking, they serve. In grace they curve. |
  
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K.S. Lenk Household*** Nov 27 15, 13:09 
greenwich I find rhyming not liberating. It stymies the flow... Nov 27 15, 17:56 K.S. Lenk I mostly agree with you, Greenwich. I find rhyme l... Nov 27 15, 18:04 Luce Not sure what this was all about. Does it have to... Nov 28 15, 23:21 Cleo_Serapis Hello Krista,
Since this poem has a set rhyming p... Nov 29 15, 17:20 K.S. Lenk Hi Cleo,
No of course I don't mind. I didn... Nov 29 15, 17:27 
AMETHYST Hi K.S. Lenk,
Good to meet you. I will get to you... Nov 30 15, 14:04 Cleo_Serapis Hi Krista,
Ok - I've moved your poem into the... Nov 29 15, 19:48 Eisa Hi Krista,
I'm glad this has been moved over ... Dec 1 15, 19:00 Psyche Hi Krista,
I've been reading over your lin... Dec 2 15, 03:21 K.S. Lenk Hello Eisa and Psyche,
Thank you for your feedbac... Dec 2 15, 12:18 Psyche Krista,
Many thanks for sharing your thoughts ... Dec 3 15, 16:02 Larry Hi Krista,
Welcome to MM and I'm glad Lori mo... Dec 4 15, 00:21 JustDaniel Hi Krista! I'm going to pirate Larry's... Dec 5 15, 08:59 K.S. Lenk Hi Larry,
Thank you so much for your thoughts.
I ... Dec 5 15, 05:08 JustDaniel Krista, here is one of a thousand ways in which yo... Dec 5 15, 10:12 K.S. Lenk THANK YOU, Daniel, for your wonderful explanation ... Dec 5 15, 10:30 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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