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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry  |
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Air to a Summer's DAY Summer: silent steps with gentle feet and from flowers bees buzz merrily. Creatures clothed in pigments that deceive; dissolve into nature's wonderland-- where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek. Air to a Summers DAY Summer: steps with gentle feet and from flowers, bees buzz merrily. Insects sporting pigments that decieve fade into coloured petaled chambers. Where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek. repeat Where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek. John 
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
Thank You PB,
dON'T GET ME GOING.  i'M PLEASED THAT YOU ARE TREADING THE BOARDS. Keep your mind focused on the family at MM. You won't go wrong. Regards, John ······· ·······Arnfinn
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Arnfinn Air to a Summers Day Sep 24 08, 07:43 
ohsteve John, Is that first word summen or summer? Makes a... Sep 24 08, 19:00 Arnfinn G'day Steve,
Summer, mate.
I left a word out... Sep 26 08, 02:36 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John,
I'm not familiar with this style, bu... Sep 28 08, 17:51 Arnfinn Hi, Peg
Nah, I want a pause before 'and... Sep 29 08, 06:06 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John,
Thanks for clarifying "air." ... Sep 29 08, 08:46 Cleo_Serapis Hey John,
What a lovely new take on your Summer... Sep 29 08, 19:29 Arnfinn Yeah, Peg,
The whole scenario, is captivating. ... Sep 30 08, 09:04 Arnfinn Hi Lori,
Yeah, I'm very happy with this piec... Sep 30 08, 09:09 ohsteve John, I like the change very much, makes for an ea... Sep 30 08, 15:34 Arnfinn Thank Steve,
I think I'll take the girls adv... Oct 1 08, 02:44 prerna bala your nine silly bulls sing a nice song Mister Jan 13 09, 06:49 
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