greener on the other side... of the Gump, rictameter Options

[JustDaniel]

greener on the other side… of the Gump


Forrest

may well have said

that  Busy is as busy does!

but  buzzy . . .  like a bumble bee

will never let your honey comb your hair

because she’ll flit away to find

her long-forgotten dream

in someone’s green

forest


© Daniel J Ricketts 04 May 2005

[Guest_Toumai_*]

Daniel,

And one would miss her once she's buzzed off, I presume ...  :butterfly:

Thanks for the thoughts,

Fran

[JustDaniel]

Thanks, Fran...

I guess you can see that I'm been buzzy playing around with the sound and feel and shape of rictameters.  I think they're a wonderful medium for focusing light on one thought or feeling.  This one just occured to me in response to a friend's rictameter in Poetic-Voices... so I thought I'd include it here too, just for the fun of it... though of course the subject matter is quite serious.  Sometimes serious thoughts sink in better in a Light medium, don't you think?

As to your query... I'm thinking that the busy bee may not notice her absence for a while, then suddenly will find himself in a huge empty space.

sheddin' a bit o' Light, Daniel  :sun:

[Guest_Cathy_*]

Hehehe  This is so cute and very clever!  I love the way you
give it a twist in the middle.

that  Busy is as busy does!

but  buzzy . . .  like a bumble bee

will never let your honey comb your hair

That's my favorite part ... "bumble bee" and "honey comb" your hair!

What a mind you have!
Cathy