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 Mar 26 05, 15:03
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry  |
Predator
Ingests Raw flesh Angrily and Narcissistically Hiding devious Attack. ŠLinda Balboni 2005 ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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 Mar 26 05, 15:26
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Hi Lindi;
Good to see you on here again. I've missed you. This is a rather good acrostic and I enjoyed it muchly. Well done! James. |
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Mar 26 05, 17:03
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Lindi. :wave:
Well done! This acrostic says much in so few words! :wolf: I can relate. Hugs. Cleo :pharoah: ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Mar 28 05, 10:33
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 Assyrian Posts: 203 Joined: 3-August 03 Member No.: 11 Real Name: Beth Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Lindi!
Sorry I didn't get a chance to stop by earlier. Ya know, I dated that guy! Boy did you hit the nail on the head with this one! I'm rotten at acrostics. This was great. I especially love "narcististically"!!! (Did I spell that right? What happened to the days when I could remember how to spell words? Sigh. I blame motherhood!) Big Hug, Beth ······· ·······I am who I am.
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Mar 28 05, 16:22
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Dear Lindi,
Seeing as how you spelled it right in the poem itself, I've taken the liberty of correcting the typo 2nd H in the title. I trust that is OK with you, or would you throw me to the ingestive fishes ? Love Alan |
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Mar 29 05, 11:27
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Lindi,
thanks for reminding me not to dangle my fingers in the water when fishing the Amazon. Cool Larry  
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Mar 31 05, 16:39
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
Hello poets~
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting on my metaphoric mutilation! This acrostic symbolizes how perfidious people, affectionately kiss one side of your face all the while preparing to devour the other side whole! I appreciate all of the responses very much! Take care of yourselves. ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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