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greenwich
post Mar 30 17, 15:55
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Lowly speck of truth
do you read to self improve ?
Are you tired of others lights dimming ?
where knowledge is no longer a mission.
Whilst the night's owls insist on screeching
their own legend,
has anyone the right to think
any the less of you ?


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Eisa
post Mar 30 17, 16:45
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QUOTE (greenwich @ Mar 30 17, 21:55 ) *
Lowly speck of truth
do you read to self improve ?
Are you tired of others lights dimming ?
where knowledge is no longer a mission.
Whilst the night's owls insist on screeching
their own legend,
has anyone the right to think
any the less of you ?


This seems rather philosophical, Antony. I'm not completely understanding it all on first read, but that's just me!

I think perhaps self-improve needs a hyphen.

Good to read you again.

Eira


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greenwich
post Mar 31 17, 06:14
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Thank you Eira for your support Maybe follower of truth instad of speck of truth. Poem's about those who want to learn and those who don't and a suggestion of the World each wants to inhabit


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