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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Fixed Form and Rhyming Poetry for Critique -> Herme's Homilies _ Give it a Rest

Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 1 19, 18:49

Give it a Rest

If you're fighting with crowds at the mall
your experience won't be called dull,
but your Amazon Prime
takes you so much less time.
Christmas shopping is done by the fall.

Why the pushing and shoving to shop,
finding parking spots, stress till you drop?
Pick and click it online
then lean back to supine,
dream of friends who are rushing nonstop.

© MLee Dickens’son 07 Dec 2018
Daniel J Ricketts

Posted by: Psyche Dec 2 19, 09:26


Good limericks, Daniel. Double...wow! Impressive and deftly thought out. Enjoyed and had a good laugh.
I used to purchase at Amazon Smile because some profits go to charities, such as the World Wildlife Association. But I spent so little that they hardly got anything!
Now I only buy local online.
Blessings to you and your family, Psyche

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