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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ ARCHIVES -> MMHC (Holiday Classic) -> Halls of Montezuma _ A Baby Boy Was Born

Posted by: ArtesiaMeeks Nov 15 06, 12:49

In a lowly manger
a baby boy was born
‘midst a town of strangers,

perhaps hydrangeas,
a baby boy was born
in a lowly manger.

A holy night changer
a baby boy was born
‘midst a town of strangers.

Could be called a ranger
a baby boy was born
in a lowly manger.

His life was in danger
a baby boy was born
‘midst a town of strangers.

He came as arranger
this baby boy when born
in a lowly manger
‘midst a town of strangers.

© 2006
VILLANELLE

Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Nov 15 06, 13:02

Thank you for your Holiday entry Carol!

Best of luck!

May the 'classic' holiday spirit be shared in your heart throughout the season!

~ Mosaic Musings Staff

Posted by: TygerTyger Nov 17 06, 09:34

Cool rhyme!

Looks like the competition is gonna be tough!

Good 'un and good luck!

Dennis!

Posted by: Blank_Canvas Nov 17 06, 14:11

This reminds me of my favorite Christmas carol of all time....."Away in a manger." Also brings us back to the biblical story of the birth of Christ. Another nice entry. Best of luck.
Marcia

Posted by: Aphrodite Nov 17 06, 18:06

Hello ArtesiaMeeks~

A simply sweet and lovely poem!

I enjoyed the rhyming and the impact your words leave.

Merry Christmas!

Lindi