This is a very original poem composed of different levels of mythology, spirituality and fantasy. I found it a very powerful poem.
This is posted in Seren's Synapse: http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=9861
Absolutely am smiling from ear to ear to see this here! Good Picking Snow!
Good Luck, Tim ~ On yet another amazing poem! :) Hugs, Liz
Hiya Tim.
In order to have this poem included in our IBPC poll that I will creating this evening, we need to have your permission for inclusion.
I've sent along a few PM's and inquired in my crit to this poem as well. Should I assume you do NOT give your permission? If I do not hear back by 6PM this evening, sadly, we won't be able to include this one.
Please advise.
Lori
I would like to nominate this poem located in Herme's http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=10030&pid=93655&st=0&#entry93655 This poem is well written, making great use of metaphor and sounds to enhance certain meanings. The magical setting and intention is a grabber for any age - it not only speaks of enchantment, but the underlying, but peeking out metaphor of real life experiences are brought to life with this as well.
I would like to nominate this for its strong use of sonics, and imagery connecting the past into the future - There is a strong sense of history within the majestic setting and tone. The poem unfolds the details of a story while maintaining a steady, harmonious voice. :) You will find the thread for this lovely poem at http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=8419
I would like to nominate this for the lovely sentiments and smooth rhythym and rhymes through out.
Thank you very much Liz!
I appreciate and accept the nomination. This is one challenge that I really enjoyed responding to. It begs the question, What have learned about ourselves as human beings over centuries past? Are we our own enemies?
Cheers
~Cleo
I would like to nominate this poem.
I would love to nominate this poem. The Huitian Form is delightful and this poem examples the melodious tone the form can offer. The images and tone are wonderful, they make my spirit dance and I found both the detail of the poem and the skill in creating the poem a pleasurable experience to read! Wonderful poem!
Thank you Liz
Hugs Snow
Congrats Snow - a lovely dance this is!
I would like to nominate this poem for its enchanting theme, the skill and pleasurable read. The calm and wonderfully pleasant feeling I get each time I read it. The images are stark and magical.
Are you the original author of this poem? Yes
Has this poem ever been published? No
Has this poem been nominated by any other participating board (of IBPC)? No
Has this poem been reviewed as "best and final" to assure the latest revision is judged? No... I will try to have it up to snuff before the deadline.
Is your email address on file up to date (what is it)? Yes
Do you accept the nomination to submit the work (if selected to represent MM)? Yes
If yes to above question, what is your real name? Cathy Bollhoefer
Congratulations! Thanks Cathy ~ this is yet another example of how wonderful your talent and your heart is...
Hugs, Liz
I would like to nominate this very unique poem written by Liz. It's unusual format lends itself to a very thought provoking piece of work, displaying irony and humour. I love it! This poem is located in Seren's Synapse http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=9937.
I use my left hand these days,
speaking aloud, truths
that never dared to dance from my lips.
Prowling promises, secrets
emerge, purge my past
of decadent pleasures, and sordid schemes
that seep through crevices,
as unseen touches that haunt
in restless sleep.
Poetry surges
across vacant pages -- animated.
Unfortunately the words
are much too sloppy to decipher.
I am honoured by your nomination, Liz. Thank you.
I don't think I can accept though, because the original was published in '03. I have changed it on site here, but it is too close to the original to qualify, I think.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Oh this one has been published too.
But thank you Liz. I am excited that you thought it worthy for the IBPC.
Well nominated. :) I am very tired after several night shifts, but will be back.
K
Thanks Kathy for your reply.
Yes, the IBPC will not accept previously published works. :(
That's ok - I'm sure you'll have other poems that can be nominated over time.
Cheers
~Cleo
Thanks Kathy for letting us know - that's too bad, but at least we're all on the same page in that this one should be seen by a wider audience.
The IBPC won't accept previously published poems. :(
I'm sure you'll have other works to share in time....
Cheers
~Cleo
Oh Kathy! -- what a shame. I like this one so much that I have nominated it for Member's Choice for March instead. Good Luck!
Snow
I would like to nominate http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=9930 by Psyche (Sylvia) located in Seren's Synapse. This poem is so beautiful, with stunning imagery throughout, with much to read between the layers. It's found in Seren's Synapse.
That's so nice of you! Thanks.
Hmmmmm ... Kathy I am both happy and sad. I am very sad that these wonderful poems are not eligable for nomination in IBPC, but I am happy that your poems are published, as that is the intention here with IBPC, is to get excellent poetry such as this, read by a larger audience and published as an end result. So you've already acheived this! YAHHHH, but I would have LOVED this to have been a representative of MM's family!
Hugs, Liz
Thank you Snow for this wonderful surprise! :) I do like this poem very much. I still have some work to do on it, but it shouldn't be too long till it is considered done!
Thank you, Lori and Kathy too for your support! Hugs, all of you, Liz
Yes this is worthy of recognition... Hugs, Liz
See? I did come back. Nice one, Liz!
That's the trouble with getting things published. It's a bit like eating cake, 'cos you don't have it any more. And who knows who reads my published ones? Prob'ly in a bookcase somewhere, sad and dusty.
Oh, I haven't had the pleasure to read or comment on this one yet Snow - how lovely!
I'll send Sylvia the permission PM now.
Cheers
~Cleo
Hi Snow!
Thank you so much for nominating my poem TREASURES! What a lovely surprise!
I'm so glad you like it...
Hugs,
Sylvia
Thank you, Cleo, for your complimentary remarks. I feel quite honoured...
Hugs,
Sylvia
Ah, I liked this one from the start, Liz! I'm so glad it's been nominated, wish I had done it myself...
Best of luck!
Hugs, Sylvia
An enchanting poem, Cathy! It has such a magical atmosphere, and the form is perfect!
Best of luck!
Hugs, Sylvia
Hi Aggie.
I've updated this nomination with your newest revision. Can you please send me back your Permission PM form?
Thanks!
~Cleo
I would like to nominate Petra's Splendor, by Merlin. It can be found at http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=10007
Olive trees guard castle towers
where one weary, footsore soldier
paused enraptured,
spellbound silent,
several centuries ago.
He was homeward bound from fighting
far afield in Nabataea,
from that land of stone and splendor,
filled with Hellenistic grandeur
throughout tombs and striking temples
and its pillared palace walls.
Petra's fall went not to armies.
In a shining Baroque city
sits a dark-haired man of thirty
underneath a massive olive
whose extended branches beckoned
to a passing caballero
seeking respite.
As he listens to the birdsongs
he drifts back in time, recalling
how she gave her youthful body
and they loved in fervid frenzy
while a far-off, faint Angelus
pealed the faithful to their duties.
Flown, those kindled helix hours
when they romped through hills and canyons,
laughed and loved beneath one myrtle,
till their amethystine river
lured him to enchanted places
brimmed with charm and daunting skylines.
Flown away like fleeting birdnotes...
Oftentimes he thinks of Petra.
It's a fine, inspiring poem, with great imagery and a brilliant evocation of an ancient myth (seldom
poetized on, as far as I know).
Hope Merlin accepts!
Cheers,
Sylvia
I love this poem. What an excellent choice Sylvia - I myself was going to post! I think many of us second, third, fourth and so on ... nominate it!
Hugs, Liz
Thanks a lot, Liz and Lori.
Aggie
No thanks necessary, your wonderful poem did it for you! Good luck in this months Polling... Good to see your poetry again!
Best Wishes, Liz
Thank you Kathy and Sylvia, I am liking this one too. Still some minor revisions to complete! Thank you for the support!
Hugs, Liz
And the answer to that question powerfully allows the reader to feel the depth in your response. I think this is a powerful and amazing poem! Good luck in the polling Hugs, Liz
I would like to nominate this poem found in http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=10026, by JaxMyth. It is a very thought provoking powerful poem written with excellence.
Many thanks for the nomination but I have to decline the honour as this one is up for publication.
Kind regards,
Jax
Oh bummer, well, no it's a GOOD reason to decline. Best of luck Jan - thanks for your reply!
~Cleo
I would like to nominate this poem written by Snow and can be found in Herme's at http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=9982 because of the pleasurable read, the sounds are just short of a lullaby, and the heartfelt story touches the reader with a powerful sense of humanity and the beauty of the poem is 'felt' through out. A must read for any reader looking to 'feel' a poem.
Permission PM Sent WHoooo HOooooooo
Oh thanks for nominating this one Liz -- it is very special to me!
Hugs Snow
Well done, Liz. Let's have a party!
Permission Notice received and granted! YAHHHH .... TIm! Good luck Tim in the polling
Hugs, Liz
Hooray! I'm glad you've given permission Tim
Snow
Hello All,
I am off on vacation (NY) for a week, but I just wanted to wish everyone well and ask one of the mods/admin: could you please change "thicken" in this line---His blood slowly thickens into a bed of red roses ---back to "coagulates".
Thank you all and I wish you luck on this month's competition. Cheers!
~Tim
All set Tim!
Enjoy your vacation - I hope the retreat goes well and your visit to NYC is fun!
Cheers
~Cleo
Congratulations Snow!
Best of luck in the IBPC competition!
This is already a winner!
~Cleo
Congratulations Cathy!
Best of luck in the IBPC competition!
This is already a winner!
~Cleo
Congratulations Liz!
Best of luck in the IBPC competition!
This is already a winner!
~Cleo
Thanks Lori,
I am so excited. Will you do the honors of formatting as you have - Hmmmm, perhaps I will need to carry you around with me till I learn to do it myself.
Hugs, Liz ...
Good Luck with IBPC In May - And it looks like this Judge has a liken to poetry of quality not just R&M or FV, he really made some excellent choices for 1st, 2nd and 3rd Place and I look forward to seeing his thoughts on future poems.
This is beautiful and has a great chance of placing! :)
Hugs, Liz
This is going to turn heads at IBPC, the heart felt subject, the beautiful sounds and the amazing talents that dance from every syllable.
I know you will do well with this! Big Hugs, Liz ...
LOL! No problem Liz - it should be easier 'cos I'll be putting it into an .rtf file for the email on the 1st of May. You just need to play around with those indent tags on this forum's software to make it spaced like I did......
Best of luck!
~Cleo
Whipee! I'm so glad I nominated this -- it is so unique, I cannot see how it will fail to get a place. Fingers crossed!
hugs Snow
Thank you both for your good wishes -- and thanks for nominating this Liz. This is such an honour!
Hugs Snow
Oh Cathy -- I'm so thrilled is going to IBPC -- your muse is back gal! Whippee! This has a magical charm -- I hope the judge will not be able to resist it!
Hugs Snow
TRULY WONDERFUL, CATHY!!!! CONGRATULATIONS OVER AND OVER!!!!
HUGS FROM YOUR FRIEND,
SYL ***
Thanks everyone! *smiles*
Cathy
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