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 Nov 16 09, 21:59
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Breathe in, breathe out, ah...
Autumn never smelt so fresh, so where is the snow? Nov. 16, 09 © Steve Pray |
  
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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
Dec 30 09, 13:01
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Larry and Wally, thanks my friends. Larry I didn't want to get preachy either, it just becomes frustrating when trying to express things the words come out but never quite the way I wish...lol. As I said before I really do appreciate the critique and don't wish it to stop, because it does generate questions in my mind and now I have something else to go read and ponder about. Yes these things to tend to inspire the writing of others...lol.
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ohsteve Haiku Nov 16 09, 21:59 
Larry Hi Steve,
I came by to refute "Scarab's... Dec 29 09, 11:18 ohsteve Larry, thanks for reading and the comments. Scarab... Dec 29 09, 21:37 ohsteve Maybe we should just call it three line free form/... Dec 29 09, 21:42 Larry Hey Steve,
You are probably right about renaming ... Dec 30 09, 00:40 Thoth Dear Steve,
This is defiantly a haiku as it refer... Dec 30 09, 04:10 Thoth Nice thing about haiku is they keep spawning more.... Dec 30 09, 04:56 
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