Faux-ku is my own brain child, developed over a long time of playing with haiku and senryu. My Light, so to speak, dabbles in wit, and hopefully it has its place in haiku/senryu-type poetry. This form can have seriousness, but it will always be dressed in Light clothing.
(Just remember, these threads are for us to PRACTICE in! Let NO ONE suppose that I'm here to be a teacher. I AIN'T! But practicing in short forms, I believe, can improve one's ability in other forms, including Haiku. However, I AM the expert in faux-ku merely because it is my own baby! I'm willing to engage a tutor to bring it to maturity, if one is here and available to me.
blown aweigh in Bill-lows
president got cot
with print down... lying still,
sheets pillowed to wind
© M Lee Dickens’ son 23 Sept 2004
a chant’s meeting
throat dried up in knots;
then, about to cry uncle,
had auntie phone back
Here's the one I promised James with a bit o' hillbilly homor:
LOL Daniel - thank you very much!
And all the others are most chucklesome, too.
Well done with your invention... have looked here before but these are very good. You should start a competition for the best to popularise this new form of yours - (no prizes) - just ku-dos.
Cheers and thanks, James.
Thank you James... and for the ku-dos suggestion too. LOL
I'll tell you what: you may announce the comptetition yourself, with this as the come-on... if you like. ( I don't know about doing such things! ):
Hi Daniel,
You're the king of the faux-ku, but I'll try
Fran
friends tied up in Nots;
argue-meant creatively:
whine comes from sour grapes
Hi Daniel... Can put an announcement about a contest if you don't mind judging the results?
If you are really intertested just let me have a closing date and number of entries per person allowed (and any other details you want) and we'll promo it.
James.
Hey, James...
I'll personally judge the contest and offer as a prize, a copy of the new literary journal: Mary Clark's (Poetic-Voices) Impressions... which is due out right soon. How about three entries per person, and entries do by the close of our "Presidents' Day" Monday, 21 Feb... in time for George Washington's Birthday (Tuesday, 22 Feb) so that I can offer my judgment on his day: "I cannot tell a lie."
In anticipation of the event, let me offer this Revolutionary Retro piece:
Big George drives 'em far,
chips well, but can’t putt ‘em down;
cannot read a lie!
© Daniel J Ricketts 04 Feb 2005
slicing sLightly into the rough, Daniel
Hi Daniel.
I just added three new 'awards' to MM yesterday in our FAQ forum.
In these 'practice and learning threads' here in Karnak we do not award prizes if a member seeks to initiate a challenge/contest, but we can start using one of the new awards if you'd like to pursue a contest here in this tile?
What do you think of this award below?
*New Greek Urn (formerly Mod Choice)
*Graphic provided by
http://www.ladydorothea125.net/CelticCastleDesigns.html
This award may be used for internal member challenges. Any member can initiate a challenge, state your rules, and choose a winner.
If you are interested, lay out your specific rules, start and end date and what you will be looking for and I will send a PM to the members.
no faux-ku a ward
if you’d write a wrong
don’t lift a finger to aide;
biting it tinders
© MLee Dickens’son 29 March 2005
milk weed ?
what made cow wander
in from her verdant meadow ?
was it smoking grass?
© Daniel J Ricketts 28 June 2005
Hi Daniel,
What made cow wonder -
smoking grass leading to bull?
hey! a brisket joint?
*Rambles off - blame it on the thunder storms*
Fran
Now how in the world did I miss that, Fran!?
Cute... now where is your TITLE?
Here's another thought for you:
Hi Daniel, good to see you :wave:
I'd forgotton all about that one (entirely inspired by yours, of course) ... shall ponder a title.
Like the comment on management, hehe.
Fran
While you're thinking of a title, Fran, here's another faux-ku to stimulate you further:
eschewing the fat
noon facial hair trim
makes high protein wrap filler;
day-lite shavings thyme
© Daniel J Ricketts 02 Sept 2005
heavy wait
ticked off, thanks given
hands encircled luscious food;
too many seconds
© MLee Dickens’son 29 Nov 2005
Hi Daniel
Clocking in again, lol? Good to see you :cheer:
Fran
Hi Daniel,
Welcome back. Good to see you posting again. We've missed you.
ticked off, thanks given
hands encircled luscious food;
too many seconds
Sounds like the turkey wasn't the only one stuffed at Thanksgiving. ???
hey, these are such fun to read! all that seriousness brain-bashing with 'to ku or not to ku - is that a question?' makes this a pleasant light relief. Have you ever visited the site called 5seven5? poems and replies all have to be in that form, but anything goes.
so, don't know how this'll match up to your hi standards, but here are a few taken and abused posts of mine:
let's do the time-warp again
this piece is unsure
of itself, of time, of space:
just a little warped
to a vanilla smoothie
i was with you, dude
till you went and ice ice'd me
baby, too retro
don't peak too soon, boy {grins}
have you a Sherpa
to guide your breathless ascent?
experience counts
p.m i.m m&m's alergy
this could be construed
as internet flirting, no?
nuts need not apply
what a boor
the man's such a pig --
displays porcine niceties;
makes me quite bristle!
hello sailor
Pop-eye'd with tension
needs a little olive oil
plain good for the heart
hornblower
this blisterin' rash!
a question of sea-man-tics?
blast the scurvey dog!
chart-stopping
is Pythagoras
listed in Cook's World's who's who?
such a cutie pi
oh dear oh dear oh dear
stags, hot 'n' horny
(but the doe's just such a moose! )
they're stuck in a rut
okay, i'll shaddup now. these are addictive
cot cold-handed
he's so licit...Ted
stand-in on the street - cornered
with too reddened chic s
web bloggers
melting in the sun
icicle ploops in puddle
onlooker ducks
fie night questin'
edgeless time flows on
taking up no space et al
will it ever rend?
Tears Away
Candle in the wind
Smoke gets in, your eyes water
blown out of proportion
costly smells
perfume drops on skin
odorus concoction smells fine
no lingering cents
A form invented (and perfected?) by Daniel....this I cannot resist. What a good exercise this was too
here's my humble attempt at mastering faux-ku
Ghost Writer
Writers block was cured
by phantom words appearing;
shouldn't I be spooked?
Daniel started a fabulous idea here. I'd completely missed Steve's two - I must catch up more often.
One of the Brit broadsheet newspapers has a comp for "haiku" (yes, they admit that the def'n is not technically accurate, for any purists) that represents news matters.
http://books.guardian.co.uk/games/haiku/
Might be worth a go?
Fran
Hey, y'all...
Sorry I've not been about these parts. Don't want any of you to think I don't appreciate your pieces. Each one has a very good bite! Well-done!
Here's a bit of a stinker that occurred to me a couple of weeks ago:
a void flying
oversees hijack
scared everything out of him;
stays in continent
runnin' off sLightly, Daniel B)
General Milling
Total employ meant
affirmative action clan
produced lively 'hood
© MLee Dickens'son 21 Aug 2006
How about I celebrate a year away from this thread with something that I just discovered in the corners of my file ~ some of my earliest faux-ku:
bad vibes
concentric circles:
tattoo artist drew a bead
on his next victim.
© Daniel J Ricketts 10 Dec 2002
all eyes
underground tube-ers
just sit and root for their star,
a veggie tater.
© Daniel J Ricketts 29 Nov 2002
asp oration
Cleo’s craft blue last
up t’a Nile later; she’d lost
wind around the neck
© Daniel J Ricketts 11 Dec 2002
blindly speaking
email address lists
(sent parenthetically)
will remain private
© Daniel J Ricketts 17 December 2002
colored comments
it’s hard to couch words
- azure well a-wear, Priceless -
in envy-green pads
© Daniel J Ricketts 17 Dec 2002
friend ships
a precious voyage
fellowship and sistership
sternly steered, by God
© Daniel J Ricketts 03 Feb 2003
I m patient
I see you can’t hear;
be patient, or you’ll become one --
I hear you can’t see.
© Daniel J Ricketts 02 Feb 2003
gossip’s fall
light breezes through trees,
unsettling tail-baring;
note whispering leaves
© Daniel J Ricketts 23 Feb 2003
marely cloud?
drinking thunderheads
frolicking in whited fields;
mere ‘altered vision?
© Daniel J Ricketts 01 March 2003
oh bleak!
kept by my bias,
from seeing right angles, I
die agon-ally
© Daniel J Ricketts 20 Dec 2002
why-died
ever seed fear?
look at pupil die-laters
taken hostage
© MLee Dickens'son
Hi Daniel, nice creation and lots of fun. Mind if I try?
Ho's stage is taken
Street corner lights a broad way
play is expensive
Hi Daniel,
Thanks for the info. I didn't put "street" on the first line because it was not contained in your last line (or does that matter in this thread?)
How about this title and revision.
curb appeal
ho's stage is taken.
street corner lights a broadway
play that"s expensive.
Larry
no mutter
if you've no mind
does it really matter?
take that stray pup's brain
doggerel
abrade that stray pup!
add rice and various herbs,
pet a full stomach
no veggie tarryin'
pity full stomach
when yore obese;
in-fat-you-ate it
sauce sages
in-sinew-weighted
fork casting piece full daze
spring is now waisted
cab age
hack's old vehicle
got an expensive paint job --
by taxi dermist
re fused help
european queen
and aide were shocked by bare wires
die-electric poles
homespun compunction
ten puny, dry jokes
to whet his publisher's tongue;
no pun in ten did
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
wry toast
opening tin did
make room where sardines mustard
a hero's welcome
naughty kinks
found old http://www.surreyknots.org.uk/igkt-knot-charts.htm
with http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dogshank at a http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cat%27s_paw_(knot)?
frayed knot
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
Links provided in case reader over-sits (does knot under-stand?)
bird flu
the arctic tide knot
suffered from in continents
after a wrong tern.
all-men knack
weather rain or shine
volumes forecast yearly…
much ebon flow
© MLee Dickens’son 2012
gnus sprint
“e”-land grays, wide planes,
aunt elopes, Rome, old war togs,
all fear the lyin’
colostomy
gone those deep rumblings;
all old organs were removed
in the town’s churches
© MLee Dickens’son
unharried
searchers in the town
did not find a wig maker...
no tress-passing sign
it depends
no truss-pissing sign
springs your innate response:
is there foundation?
MLee Dickens'son 2013
read is covered
shunned theories found
their way into science books
when they were proofread
writer’s blah
used Nigh Quill ink
to slip a word in edgewise;
knew what parch meant
seas own wood
what a new porch ment:
no more walking the old plank
more spring and less fall
pillowing wrest
more fall lessons spring
from lighter feather down –
wind from the winter
Ken-ya run
wounds from the winner
are pulled groin and stiff muscles
post-race, you’ll tense some
50's art thou?
purchase you tinsels
to deco-rate your kitchen?
see how they pan out
Joe’s Can-o-py
show that bed pan out
I’m hurt and bound but think there’s
a Poti-phar use
grass-eating mammal
hippie potamus
is named Mary Jane Fog;
tip-toes through flowers
can abyss
flower tops throw toes
into some strange dimensions
some are fanta-sized
locks in fat you ate
fanta-size bottles
up our flabby noids;
rings of key tones
harm a knee
tenors sing off key
quires of notes have no basis
a leg grows weary
knight poop
a ledged warrior
falls over the cliff;
notes scat red be low
coast lions
red-nosed cats bellow
some rode elands but most are
eating new poached gnus
no un-tolled fine print
yeast of Newport News
the Bay-Bridge Tunnel rises;
congested buy lines
blunt forced drama
cons jested by limns
in sentence cell abrasions
quiz in art mixtures
no Euros to dullards
quiz-cycle misfits
don't get the prices right;
lost convert-table
ent dogma
last convert able
to proselytize in tongues
oral doctor in
whistlin' Dixie
diction airy
talking through one's teeth;
confederate tome
de grade you ate
shredding a tome
bookworm larvae are hungry
dispersing gnawledge
still underground
dispensed in gNawlins:
masticated swamp root-tea'n'
disc-tilled with cayenne
what are foul
ducks filled with cayenne
are munched better with butter
and spicy quackers
hid in a tire
does spy see crackers?
seasoned gumbo-shoe a-salts
white guise in Harlem
some oaken shoes
wheeze guys, inhale ‘em;
coffin building to dim eyes
chews or take that dip
dry eyes stopping
frozen token dip
in French Quarter fountain:
thigh à la mode
bear-ly noticed
to hide a lame ode
write on grizzly forum walls
for cub web browsers
itsy widow spied 'er
cob web browser
stalks for husky corn spiders;
female eats e-male
call boy
fee male gets e-mail
from her effete in dull gents
if they jiggle low
nonsuch sport
iffy jiggle low
while she's decked in moo moo'd;
jumped her mooning
'e wrecked isle bed lam
her moaning junks your
concurrent satisfaction
ending tomb essence
re sir-wreck shun
andiron tomb essence
raises rod from the dead;
heat steels the show
deer camps
hart sleeps in the snow
without enough doe for warmth
racking up more points
bottling up the glut
wracking up the pints
lessons the drinking blight;
new classes of quartz
Dis-CERN-ing Humor
new glasses for quarks
helps them see the fun e-side
atom part tickles
A TOM'S PARTS
A tom's testicles
are very worn at the seams
but his beauty calls
Alan
Eye-full Cowards
booty calls are butts
looking for a difference
in personal sects
some a cum laud
impersonal sects
erect private businesses;
rub sum the wrong way
i spied 'er
some robbed the wrong whey.
has pissing off Miss Muffet
a curd to you yet?
Hi Daniel,
Thank you, glad you enjoyed.
Larry
REGRETS
occured to you yet
you ignore best tune ever
I did it my whey
Alan
Alan, faux-ku needs title!
Photo Oops!
my whey in the eye
laughing at the camera
Miss Muffet said "cheese"!
STICKY PUDDING
Miss Muffet sniffed glue
she ingested more than planned
her lips are now sealed
Alan
ads that subtract
slip sales in her news
to make her spend more money
read between lyings
NOT A VIRGIN QUEEN
read all about it
how Hill wants to wear trousers
but in the White House
Alan
no horse hence
butt on a white horse
slaps the saddle with each stride
stirrup some bruises
EGO 'T'ISN'T
stir up some bruises
memories will do that well
for engrams R us
Alan
hire a glyph
foreign grammar is
very hard to understand
pidgins talk better
TRULY BLESSED
pigeons poop better
when they are flying in large flocks
and right overhead
Alan
air farce
to write overhead
using the sky for paper
is plane exercise
Dad's Dancing
a plain exercise
used to call it Dad's dancing
now that Zumba rules all
Alan
food for thought
all the zombie rules
will have to be written down
more brains are required
HEADLESSNESS RULES
more brains are required
chickens run on quite heedless
of good decorum
Alan
a bridged version
rum décor is good
lots of decorative bottles
filled with empty lives
HAVE ONE, NEED ANOTHER
empty lives filled with
television and so forth
like chinese snacking
Alan
a boss or a loss
the sneaky Chinese
invents chopsticks from rulers;
Japanese Diet
the ritz charlatan
so she ate crackers
while pretending to be friends
a crumby bed mate
Yes Alan,
that is what I was referring to in my piece! The Chinese chopped up "Japanese rulers"... "Diet" during many of
their wars. Oh, please don't shout!
Dear Larry,
Now I have your comment, I see much more in your faux-ku than I saw before. Very clever indeed. I looked up diet and found ruling assemblage, but did not backward-connect.
JUST DESSERTS : SERVES YOU RIGHT
a crumbly bed mate
fifty year plus marriage
priapic ? no chance
Alan
PS Is size 3 bold acceptable for title ?
Alan, actually, bold with no caps is how Daniel started the string.
the art of losing
no prior pick chance
makes an artistic winner
to gamble is Toulouse
come and go
to gamble, to gain
and to lose all in a flash
that is the essence
Alan
computer litters
the e-sense is that
which children possess to know
their parents have none
generation
their parents had none
of the great advantages
but they scrimped and saved
Alan
trans in dental
saving their scrimshaw
walrus battle to the death
they're long in the tooth
don't look a gift dynosaur in the mouth
who's long in the tooth
common or garden dentist
or found dynosaur ?
Alan
in sir shun
our dinosaur found
a faux-ku with no title
dubbed it Senryu
marry, sir, art thou larry ?
I dub thee Sir Night
for those in a great hurry
was best I could do
Alan
language of the hurt
adieus was called best
for friends saying their good-byes
I do's aren't for friends
partings
bon voyage is good,
adieus not for aetheists
unless to convert
Alan
tom cat a strophe
useless to converse
or beg forgiveness from wives
poetic justice
poetic paen
poetic justice
not any justice at all
hardly paen of praise
Alan
organ recital
hardly peein' preys
on my mind about kidneys
water wee to do
Alan, you forgot the title again
titular tosspot (me)
what are we to do
oh dear, forgot to forget
amend - title's up
Alan
divide or concur
total up a man
by himself he is nothing
women add value
tense relief
value women ads
when the wife pays attention
for presents past hence
you're a nation
past president's hints
drown in congressional pools;
water they doing?
pie d adds circumference
watering the dough
after adding the Crisco
makes all your kneads met
horse hints
knees meet and it makes
you look strange with a cowboy
because you spell OX
awk word
the buzzard shrieked Awk!
when mate swooped in featherless;
hard to swallow
migrating meals
to swallow the herd
crocodiles crowded the shore
to a Nile ate ‘em
free shipping grounded
true, a Nile ate 'em!
said the surprised Amazon;
wave overhead cost
predator’s paradise
overhead waves cost
surfers an arm and a leg
vacations with sharks
flea-bottom miss
vocation with sharps
searches for blood in vein;
in-vial-able job
starring rolls
Vail jobs enable
skiers to get their big break;
holly, woods and vines
whole in one?
holey wood's divine?
purported peace of the cross
assures the week
no horse hence
your ass of the week
is career politicians
a pro found braying
a slice of whine
pro found Lee straying
right-lea with his tea shot;
said "ain't true vino"
school daze
truant Vinnie said
some learning can be painful
no pot in high school
down and dirty
no high points in school
but the Marine Corps taught me
crawl with high points low
can-o-bliss
high points through low clouds
cold beer will not quench your thirst
Colorado weed
ENLISTMENT
Colorado seed
can be spread ever so wide
foreign invasions
Alan
more than two?
in visions for rain
Noah built a floating zoo
what are they eating
Boyz
what are they eating ?
p'raps snails and puppy dog's tails ?
being desperate
Alan
in-ovation
disparate beings
fail to title their faux-ku
and get no applause
Poets
We get no applause
and we are well used to it
so we wander off
Alan
stray intent shuns
we often wander
off poetry’s beaten path
with “I don’t mind-games”
AGRICULTURAL CLAP-TRAP
those “I don’t mind-games”
we claim don't influence us
load of horse manure
Alan
guy dance
your horseman loaded
blanket and saddle on mare
but reins won't halt her
simelda type
rains will not halt her
nor calamity, typhoon;
wife out buying shoes
Alan
wife-shopping?
wife's out-buying shoos
husband to court her again;
divorce in wing-tips
best of both worlds
divorce in secret
pretend you remain married
the best of both worlds
Alan
hard on clothing
vest of both worlds
worn on the Enterprise;
re-sheathed back on Earth
make love not war ? yes, sir !
meanwhile, back on earth
re-sheathed swords, but not condoms
girls all won over
Alan
floor boarded
all girls run over
to guys with fancy new cars
it’s auto mat ick
manual for automatic
it's automatic
so says manual of love
adulation, sex
Alan
embedded
ad oration: sex
is smore than graham crackers;
do it with chocolate
cracker-wise
do it, go crackers
light, retire to safe distance
sparklers are good too
Alan
punk-n pyre
two sparklers are good
for lighting bottle rockets,
it is matchless fun
arseless
this is matchless fun :
soaking Dad with mush snowballs
and laughing arse off
Alan
Note, please: many of our entries of late have been far off the mark of faux-ku:
1 Title to be play on words itself
2 BOTH sections of the ku must contain a play on words
bale-out
ass' laugh-off
makes a donkey of himself;
fails Hee-Haw role call
a maize zing
Hee-Haw roll call fails
without Grand-pa's load of corn
the show can't suck seed
Any better Daniel?
false adage
the show can suck; see
what I have been telling you
it must not go on
Alan
don't blow it
must snot go on
dripping down my nose?
make tissue of it
delicate matters
a tissue napkin
is quite insubstantial
best snot avoided
Alan
stand-up unstuffed
best snot voided
by one with dry humors;
often buggers it
Soft Landing
debugging software
is pain in proverbial
recommend tissue
Alan
the 'ruler' measures
wreck 'o mended
unentitled faux-ku:
words want to play
buried meanings
words don't want to play
desire to not show faces
a too grave error
Alan
taken for granite
two in grave errors
the gambler was found cheating
a worthless marker
underground revealed
too-grave error:
masochists' bodies
became switched
no bare bear insight
a twitch and bees came
attacking the bear who ran
but not fur enough
post-hibernation
he has fur enough
for an extremely long trip
goes head over heels
Alan
headed for ewe
goats head heals over
after battling the ram
now he's not horny
whether
now it's not hoary
but the weatherman predicts
the iceman cometh
Alan
u follow g
I. C. E. man came
let female aliens go
saw sirs as flight risk
weighty responsibility
a sister helpless
with poor-dieting sibling;
failed him a gain
tongue tide
she flailed him again;
and rode that cheeky weapon,
serf-ing waves of words
book bombed
surfing waves of words
it's more filler than thriller
not like nuclear text
Alan
would wind help
I like new clear text
teaching the flute but it is
difficult to reed
can-o-bliss
give weed to a cult
and they forget what to do
smoke signals blank it
blankety-blank
blanketed smoking
temper peed his mattress;
doped springs internal
lawn boyz
dopes spring eternal
they grow in the hooky fields;
mow each other down
pillow talk
watch lest you mow down
the geese; their under-feathers
could scatter your sleep
loose slips
chatter in your sleep
confessing things you did wrong
learn how to sleep run
farmers mark it
slippery no-how;
when the eggs shell out for lunch
axes bring home bacon
cookin’ lessens
Ex baking brings home
memories of her cheating
I don’t like ho cakes
self-rising batter
ho made hot cakes
for unexpected fresh meat;
he was up for it
ex press package
it was four he-cups
he wore before his divorce;
but she had a ball
changing under where?
'he' will have a ball;
she no longer trains vest tight
since doctor's scalpel
mal-practice
the doctor’s scalp fell
while examining patients,
their laughter lost his
poke 'er bra-burning
the laugher lost tit
when she bet on a bod joke;
pot went up in smoke
ticket to rite
pot smokin’ went up
when some states legalized it,
I got near cited
bumpy texture
I got near-sided
when I changed lines texting;
driver got horny
club mem-burr
driver got hoary
while playing golf in the snow
warmed up with the woods
up for a campfire?
his wood warmed him up
while she undressed from afire;
he became closer
catch and re-lease
became a closer
when he fished for a living
by renting his sole
flatfooted
his sole is rent;
discovered the fishy source
of his beached footwear
a blush with death
to bleach his footwear
he left them out in the sun
body almost dyed
a guarded life
rippled bawdy hide
bakes in waves at the seashore;
he's tide to no one
no hands - some cab
no one hitched a ride
with the circus sideshow freak
he was just all thumbs
digital wind-up
he is all thumbs down
so no one can pick him up;
directions on hand
salient salute
one hand directions
instruct you in lots of things
one finger doesn’t
where to ship it?
a finger that's licked
is oft leery of the ring;
finger-boxing groom
just desserts
fingers from boxes
could be sponge cake called Lady’s
or from thieving hands
short-armed
former thieving hands
unable to make cut-off;
they both came up short
rub a dub tub
their bath came up short
when the old pump stopped working
water we to do?
Ill-Concerned
watered and poo-pooed
before waiter checked on us;
said that I looked flushed
un-fin-ished
looking flushed and sad
the goldfish righted itself
short backstroke lesson
ovenly package
short backstroke loosens
mussels given a rubdown;
turnover rises
bypass paste… re:
rising turnovers
look good but aren’t healthy;
we, a gluten ate
flushed with nonscents
wee, a glutton ate
though he was full of poop;
he joined a movement
when some parade
his movement was joined
by some procrastinators,
they meet whenever
sheepish encounter
they met when never
a lamb had ever been herd;
ewe can't believe it
nutty conception
can’t relive its youth
oak trees from little acorns
I wooden try it
dry eye in the house
wooden-eye try it
if I could only sea it;
I need wrist aces
long sleeve suite
wrist aces are nice
but you might get an arm broke
or just lose your shirt
dicey ending
Jesus lost his shirt
gamboling with disciples;
soldiers cast the die
no lotto luck
soldier had to die
but politician’s children
are not numbered there
his back was titer
the knot's number where
it's spiked with an aesthesia;
now counted senseless
a bout over?
now counted senseless
by friends and the referee
box… ring… wedding soon
a queery
boxers, ring - wedding?
pugilists in briefs propose
canvassing with hug
rough passage
hugging the canvas
sailors get sick on the mast
the ship’s still heaving
surprise out-come
the chimp's still heaving
yesterday's breakfast biscuits;
threw us a curveball
bad mitten bird
throwing a curveball
can make the batter angry
when hitting a fowl
battered in the field
when hitting a fowl
hope that you don't get caught;
better to run home
shell games
home runs to batters
are blessings when stomachs have
sunflower seed trots
outhouse gas
sunflower seed trots
across the field to dugout;
wind was blowing hard
one lump or two
was blowing wind hard
or is that an accident
gas is not solid
What-the-H-too-Old!
gas became liquid
when he bent into the wind;
solids when he froze
fire and dice
he's frozen solid
in the cryogenic tank
not a chance in hell
life in sleepless holler
knotty chants in hell:
cannot remember slip-not;
everything's down-hill
bowlegged skiing
everest down-hill
makes adrenalin rush more
must have large snow balls
failed on round table
has musty old balls
that can barely even role;
sacked from job last knight
still stealing
last night job with sack
she went to investment school
burglar turned broker
loud finish
bugler gave broker
blow job at funeral;
horny veteran
salad daze
vegetarian
had no children of her own
she’s not appealing
stripped-down sex
she's not a-peelin';
he felt forced to lie about -
how he's satisfied!
diamond hacked rattler
he sat his filed hoe
by the stone and headless snake
it sharpened the blow
Won Hung Lo
he hearkened to show
his earshot was an image;
familiar rung lobe
talcum power
four millers lube ring
so the grinder never stops
it chafes their assets
die-a-purpose?
assess chafing tush:
does it keep your stuff too warm?
it takes a powder
nose knows
intake of powder
may be cause for sneezing fits
if it doesn’t, don’t
sleeping eggs are liers
if a-dozin' don't
drop the carton on the floor;
you could crack your shell
element of fear
could cracking your shell
make you an egg-stovert
that’s how gals see ‘em
nothing inside
Southern Cal's see 'em
on the beach -- shells of themselves;
old Lifeguard rappers
clothes in count hers
old lifeguard wraps her
in the hollow of his arms
leaving his hands free
bloody good cook
leaves his hands free
and cuts to the commercial;
death-deep-frying chef
sitting bull-it
death defying chief
charged Custer’s men when loading
the wrong caliber
whining out
the Wong cabaret:
teenager didn't have white
to dwink anyhow
candy from babies
hoodwink anyhow
you can get to the suckers
sticky fingers help
handy candy
Butterfinger helps
drop names with chocolatiers;
holds peanut butter
tongue tide
peanut butter holds
onto the roof of your mouth
tasty denture cream
can't see through eye teeth
tasteless denture cream
is able to hold its tongue;
stuck in overflow
swimming in luck
float over a stick
and puncture your inner tube
rapids’ ride slows down
rabid daddy
rabbit rides, slows down,
flopping over on his sighed;
hard to reproduce
horse cents
to reproduce herds
stallions control all the mares
who might shop around
rumble for a fall
who might shop a round?
guys at a mixed wrestling match
put sleep hold on gals
remote control
sleep puts gals on hold
so they won’t talk your ears off
nature’s mute button
final touching
cute as a button;
child fund-raisin for a nose
facin' down scarecrow
corn feels
the face down scarecrow
was slapped hard by miss scarecrow
for raisin’ her dress
dressing brief
raisin address:
post office-playing boxers
both under-wearing
blown coverage
wear both rings under
some boxing gloves with tissues
for marital spats
unmoving
martial arts spats
make the ankles too stiff;
death takes the kick out
aimless gestures
the kick out at death
will always end in de-feet
denting the bucket
wanna make doe?
kicking the buckette
reveals transgender bias;
who'd pass up the buck?
safe deposits
the buck in the pass
keeps all his doe by the bank
with alarming horns
a tension
a horn alarms
ex-convict with a cell phone;
imprisoned in thought
Didn't know which to go with so I posted both.
bar designs
in prisoner’s thoughts
there are escapes for more crimes,
too much steel to steal
speaking your mind
thoughts are imprisoned
by vocabulary’s lack,
words are freedom’s key
gushy ending
words are freedom's ski
down a long, slippery slope;
flatter at bottom
cityscapes
flattering bottom
belongs to the young lady
seen around the square
math-o-matics
scene around the square
root of the multipliers:
too rabbits in heat
cold cuts
in two rabbits’ feet
there should be some kind of luck
not coincidence
surreal estate
a coin incident:
it comes up heads 50 times
while flipping a house
ill fashioned
while in the flop house
I saw the wurst of the lot
and the seersucker
stocking up
he's a seers sucker;
somehow what seems to suit him
are Wall Street prophets
can you dig it
Wall Street profiteers
say your luck is in the cards
a spade full of dirt
the fix is in
the spayed fell in dirt
causing a bad infection;
puppies won't get it
runts grunts
it won’t give pups ease
when there are not enough teats
some litters are big
auto down-and-dirty
some litters are big;
place two outside two small ones:
BM \/\/
a spray de force
bowel movements double
you up when you are seated
and you can’t stand it
gridiron solution?
when you can't stand it
lay it down and take a rest;
try block-and-tackle
passing the buck
the blocking tackle
bought a big burger for lunch
got a quarter back
tight-ended
give a quarter back
to set up receivership;
they've ruptured your bank
Jurassic Perk
they ruptured the bank
when making a withdrawal
too much dino might
very dry humor
too much Dino might
blow up your comedy roast;
try drinking your toast
star-yucks
tried dunking my toast
butter and jelly slid off
oily grape latte
bottled up love
tell your grapes olé
when you have a crush on them;
they improve with age
traction tires
I’m proving with age
that wisdom does not follow
its wrinkles await
sage lines
a wrinkle awaits
on the face of each nuance;
manifold words age
nu speek
words manifest age
when meaning is forgotten
in dictionaries
Broke awe
his diction airy
and can't pronounce for 's';
still palatable
get the message?
a steel table pal
is in the mortuary,
his last text was “I’ll”…
the hand-off
his last text on aisle
was "straighten up those big palms";
his life-line was short
say cheese
with his short laugh lines,
thin lips managed a wry smile
which no ham mustered
eye-caching head-lines
ham sandwiched mustard
between egg-face and rye lips;
yellow did him in
planting kisses
yarrow did him in
when he tried to kiss Daisy,
you must aster first
wok home the bacon
get astir first
when you're building an omelet;
flip it for profit
quite 'possom-bly
flipping fur prophet
was Pogo in the funnies,
he swamped you with truth.
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