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O weeping muse - new title - Madness

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Egyptian Group: Gold Member Posts: 327 Joined: 17-May 08 From: San Juan Puerto Rico Member No.: 508 Real Name: Sergio Ortiz Writer of: Poetry	revision #2 thanks to Sylvia and Snow. O weeping muse Weeping muse... you make me fall into a thick misty river, the tundra where my poems gather. Madness enters on the wind, the jolt of a wild animal thrashing from a spasm, its eyes seek mine in despair. O my first dead— Which winter squall carries my disordered pages, the shroud of tears we will inhabit, the gravesite where all spit their epitaphs? Revision 1 - thanks to Eisa O weeping muse you make me fall into a thick misty river; the tundra where my poems gather. …Madness enters with the wind, the jolt of a wild animal thrashing from a spasm, his eyes seek mine. O my first dead, which winter squall carries my disordered pages, the shroud of tears we will inhabit, the grave where all spit their epitaphs? Original O weeping muse you make me fall through a thick misty river; the tundra where my poems gather. …Madness enters through the wind like the jolt of a wild animal rising from a spasm. O my first dead, what winter squall carries my disordered pages, the shroud of tears we will inhabit, the grave where all spit their epitaphs? ·············· MM Award Winner