Hi Nina,
The shorter a piece the easier for reader to conjure extraneous images and meanings. My imagination runs rampant; therefore, a couple of metaphors stand based on the entire composition intended as metaphor.
Though perfectly possible, I was not expecting the entire verse to be a metaphor. Please accept my apology, and for goodness sake don't hide in any holes.
Dart a poison glance at me, the target, and I will arrow away.
Don :)
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