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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Fixed Form and Rhyming Poetry for Critique -> Herme's Homilies _ Aspirations

Posted by: Larry Jun 21 18, 13:23

Aspirations

Some flowers might aspire to smell as sweet
as roses in full bloom or their aspect
if they could only think. Would they reflect
upon their lives and feel it was complete?

To be admired in shows would be a treat
if vanity were theirs. I must reject
some flowers might aspire to smell as sweet
as roses in full bloom or their aspect

for nature's panoply would then retreat.
Variety of species could be wrecked
and gardeners, with nothing to collect,
would plant a mundane row and then repeat
some flowers might aspire to smell as sweet.

Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 22 18, 07:21

I offer my gaspirations to your fine rondel, Larry.

What else can I say? Oh, don't you think it should be "nature's" in S3L1?

deLighting in your flexibility, Daniel sun.gif

Posted by: Larry Jun 22 18, 17:16

Hi Daniel,

You are correct and as soon as I post this, it will be corrected. Thanks for the good eye.

I have posted two poems on AP; a Rondel and a Roundel. Thanks for the new toys.

Larry

Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 23 18, 19:30

I'll be looking! What is your name there?!



Posted by: Larry Jun 24 18, 16:41

Daniel,
I’ve been trying to find you on there but to no avail. I’ve chosen an old handle used for many years as my “name” on AP. It is “poetconseption”. Just a private joke pertaining to my email and when I was born.

I’ll keep looking for you there too.

Larry

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