Hi Weaver,
I always enjoy reading you poetry, but as with Luce this is proving difficult to understand.
I think the title 'Sum of parts' might hold the key - with the first line in italics
Sum of parts - half a heart - it all fits together somehow
Maybe everyone is born with half a heart
curve of belly against curve of back
soft lips pout against stiff upper lip
smooth fingers soothe a furrowed brow
You seem to be writing about 2 people, I think - one with soft pouting lips the other, stiff upper lip. I love the descriptions. It's like they are 2 opposites
loud thoughts need a whisper in the dark
a political stance requires an at ease
that which is empty deserves a good strong pour
a shot of desire cancels all the lost years.
I sense that one person is balancing the other here - sum of parts. Well I'm going to stop guessing, before I make a fool of myself. I'm glad Luce was having a problem too. I look forward to finding out.
Eira
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