Hi Debbie,
It's good to read your work again - you have been missed!
Everything a little sparser Parsley with its yellow edges Purple thistle begins the fade We have to pull the curled lettuce
I love the play with 'sparser' and 'parsley'
And although the cone flowers start to droop and drop A stand of yellow autumn blooms appears fiercely as if to protest
The cat begins to limp in the early sun sink
Early sun sink sounds a little awkward - perhaps 'early sinking sun' September always when my heart begins to break
I know how you feel, September is goodbye to summer and I always feel sad at this time.
Hope to see you again soon
Eira
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