QUOTE (galoutofdixie @ Jan 8 09, 12:51 ) [snapback]112646[/snapback]
Bev,
I liked this--I don't think you should apologize for it being depressing...it is what it is, and I think it reads very well. I especially like this line "Banish suffering from your quivering laugh"
Hello galoutofdixie~
My family come from Norfolk in England! I am in sunny South Africa (presently on holiday at the sunny, warm beach!)
Thank you for your comments and reassurance. Depressing poetry and writing has much more impact than happy...one day I will change that...I strive to write happy poetry.
With appreciation for your time.
Bev