 Descendents (Revision 2 30 Sep 08 Tweaked), senryu |
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 Dec 2 08, 19:43
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 Greek  Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in  |
Hi prerna,
Welcome to Mosaic Musing!!! So glad you like it here!! Thanks for reading and commenting!! Glad you like the revision. Again, welcome!!!  Peggy ·······  ······· |
  
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Dec 4 08, 15:40
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,376 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
Hello Peggy,
Loved your revision except for one pertinent bit; (sic)"descendents"! It should be descendants. Larry ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
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Dec 4 08, 16:37
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Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi Larry,
I looked it up in Merriam Webster's and it can be "a" or "e." Thanks for your help!!! Peggy ······· ······· |
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