(giggle)..........
Hi Pami;
I can't help myself. I get the biggest hoot out of the differing schools of poetic protocol we advocate. The PP gave you a friendly little citation on your first English Cameo, now it seems that another officer would wish to counter the infraction.
Your writing in this style is bold and shows good command (since Judi gave us such good research on the form). I gain comfort in the confidence you have with the form.
'Abandoned' lives up to it's title in emotion and an overall air of despair. The tragic end is fitting.
This all leaves me with a thought I'd share with you.
"Though grammar, spelling and punctuation are important, the stifling of creativity, to me, is the greater ignorance."
Just a thought from a common-tater
Sam