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JustDaniel
post Jul 23 07, 09:16
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minimalizing

so much wears away with time
but there's more than rhyme
with poets'
terse

appreciation
actually grows when you stop
minimalizing

© MLee Dickens'son 23 July 2007



in an unnamed minimalist form the Norm Pollack has been musing in... which I'll call for now, 'Septoling'


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post Aug 15 07, 12:04
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Hey Daniel,

Dar's wisdom in dem dare words!! It reads beautifully and looks great too.

There's nothing I can suggest except... write a few more. magictongue.png

Although I will say I think its the poet's job to minimalize, no matter what the form(even epics). They condense the view/emotion into words and sentences. What do you think??


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post Aug 30 07, 03:29
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QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jul 23 07, 15:16 ) *
minimalizing

so much wears away with time
but there's more than rhyme
with poets'
terse

appreciation
actually grows when you stop
minimalizing

© MLee Dickens'son 23 July 2007



in an unnamed minimalist form the Norm Pollack has been musing in... which I'll call for now, 'Septoling'



I like it, Daniel! What are the rules of this form?

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post Aug 31 07, 19:14
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Thanks, Snow.

Here's the link in Karnak: septoling

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