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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Fixed Form and Rhyming Poetry for Critique -> Herme's Homilies _ God's Presence

Posted by: JustDaniel Nov 19 17, 12:34

God's Presence

God's presence isn't how I feel,
that warmth when in the church I kneel,
the sentiment that's in my poems.
It's not some vision that becomes
a driving force, the Spirit's seal.

Is there some reason He'd conceal
Himself from me? why He'd not heal
me? ... then in quiet, sudden comes
God's presence.

The substance of His Word congeals;
I recognize my faith is real.
I see He's known me from the womb,
prepares for me a Heav'nly home.
Obeying Him is what reveals
God's presence.

© MLee Dickens'son 2017

during a sermon on the subject

Posted by: Larry Nov 22 17, 20:02

Hi Daniel,

Happy Thanksgiving! Hope you and all of yours are ready for the celebratory meal and that you are able to enjoy most of it.

I answered your Rondeau with one of my own in Karnak. While you were writing this in church, your pastor must have thought you were dozing off but I guess he knows of your penchant for writing and was waiting to read your latest.

No crits from me on a beautifully constructed Rondeau with even more glorious sentiment.

Good job!

Larry

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