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Posted on: Sep 29 08, 16:37 |
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Snow, So you wish to see the whole metamorphosis, eh? Okay, I think I can manage handling that ~~ before and after. Thanks for reading/replying. Jan |
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Forum: ARCHIVES -> Poetry for Crit Prior to 2011
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Posted on: Sep 27 08, 08:26 |
Egyptian
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Hello Cleo! I've juggled some time to land here this AM. Yes! You've provided some lovely changes. Will do 'cause they simplify. Thanks so much as I'm working on a chapbook now. This particular poem is an addition to the autumn section of the lil' book I'm dreaming 'bout.(entitled Seasoning) Again, thanks. Love your funny emails, too. Have a great day. ~Jan |
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Posted on: Jun 21 08, 09:55 |
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When I watch how you notice me, how you look at my hair or in my eyes, or how you glance my way to note details of what I'm wearing, I see that you even observe my jewelry - necklace, earrings, our diamond. I know your look is mine.
When you move your fingers through my long strands, I watch how you watch me - how you steer me to a state of relaxation. Love, your look is mine.
When you move your newspaper to stop your reading to view me as I walk by - you're magnetized from across the room. Baby, your look is mine.
When you stare at me as you did on our wedding day with rivers of mounting desires like no one else in the world matters - Honey, your look is mine.
When you're watching ESPN and your favorite game is on I can forget it -
you'll look at me later! |
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Posted on: Jan 20 08, 22:09 |
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It’s a spirit thing you think you can’t catch, but you know you can – you keep looking back to feel its magic again.
In each passing day, it’s coming your way, moving through in kaleidoscopic view, gracing your day rejuvenating, renewing you.
In a baby’s smile, a second glance, a simple touch, a bit of romance, enticing food boosting the mood, a delightful song when you sing along, belly-laughing that leaves you crying, starlit skies that leave you sighing – all given times to enjoy before dying.
It’s a spirit thing you think you can’t catch, but you know you can – you keep looking back to feel its magic again. |
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