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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Chapbook Competition -> Odin's Opposition _ Squeaky Snow

Posted by: ohsteve Oct 29 10, 12:57

Squeaky Snow

Squeal, squeak...every time I put my foot down on the new fallen snow, a noise would arise. It was a squeaky snow, sounds like a mouse who just bumped into a cat... oops! Squeak! Hard to sneak up on someone or something when every move your feet make, gives away your location with that scrunching squeak.

I was hoping to approach a doe and her newborn fawn to get some pictures of them in the light falling snow, but nope...squeak, squeak, squeak, that perked up their ears, off they bound and all I got was a tail end shot.

Darned squeaky snow, ... squeak... hmmm what was that? I looked around the corner and there were my siblings trying to sneak up on me with snowballs. I guess squeaky snow has its uses.


Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Oct 29 10, 13:49

Hi Steve, wave.gif

Odin 19 is slated for only prose entries. Can you edit this one to prose please?


Posted by: ohsteve Oct 29 10, 18:44

Sorry Lori, Is this better now? My mind was thinking on other things.

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