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Posted by: JustDaniel Oct 20 06, 08:04
Lanturne
The lanturne (or lanterne) is a five-line light verse evidently derived from Haiku and shaped like a Japanese lantern (hence the name) with a syllabic pattern of 1 2 3 4 1 syllables. Sometimes described as a half-cinquain there seems to be no particular requirement for subject matter, though the original intention may have been a statement of nature.
Generally, each line is a self-contained statement, such that the poem is not merely a sentence arbitrarily divided into syllables. Some suggest that the form should begin with a noun, with line 2 giving an action or description of the noun and lines 3 & 4 each giving a further description, and the 5th line offering another word for the noun, though not necessarily a synonym or even a noun. The form may or may not have a title, but it can be an integral part as the ‘sixth line’ of the poem.
snow
adrift
covering
ice where it may
fall
© MLee Dickens'son 25 Feb 2005
nose
sensing
what eye can’t
seeks to acquire
skill
© MLee Dickens'son 22 Feb 2005
naught
I ’ d r e a d
echoed sense
to comprehend
aught
© MLee Dickens'son 27 Feb 2005
food for thought
sleep
eschews
leaves quickly
with morning's break
fast
© MLee Dickens'son 24 March 2005
adrift
covering
ice where it may
fall
© MLee Dickens'son 25 Feb 2005
nose
sensing
what eye can’t
seeks to acquire
skill
© MLee Dickens'son 22 Feb 2005
naught
I ’ d r e a d
echoed sense
to comprehend
aught
© MLee Dickens'son 27 Feb 2005
food for thought
sleep
eschews
leaves quickly
with morning's break
fast
© MLee Dickens'son 24 March 2005
Posted by: JustDaniel Oct 20 06, 08:14
knight's wet
rain
falling
empties clouds
leaving his dreams
damp
© MLee Dickens'son 20 Oct 2006
rain
falling
empties clouds
leaving his dreams
damp
© MLee Dickens'son 20 Oct 2006
Posted by: AMETHYST Oct 21 06, 14:57
... 
You have tempted me to try one on for size! 
Please critqiue and teach me how to make them stronger!
Home
longing
safe refuge
family, friends
hearth
Posted by: JustDaniel Oct 22 06, 10:38
What is there to improve, Liz? 
Liz
mentor
critiquer
par excellence
bard
mentor
critiquer
par excellence
bard
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Oct 22 06, 12:02
This looks like a lot of FUN 
Daniel.
All the examples are excellent (yours too Liz)! I also think this is like a 1/2 Cinquain. 
Here's my attempt at this form:
Souls
Samhain
celebrate
faith's sacrifice
dead
Souls
Samhain
celebrate
faith's sacrifice
dead
Wonder if I should change 'dead' to 'ghouls' ?
Posted by: AMETHYST Oct 22 06, 17:27
Thank you for that nice compliment Daniel. I miss those cinquain threads we use to have... and this is a pretty interesting form to enjoy like that...
Hugs, Liz
QUOTE
Liz
mentor
critiquer
par excellence
bard
mentor
critiquer
par excellence
bard
Skill
teacher
meter mused
in Daniel's hand
craft
Hi Lori...
QUOTE
Souls
Samhain
celebrate
faith's sacrifice
dead
Samhain
celebrate
faith's sacrifice
dead
This is very powerful. I would say it would work quite well for the introduction to Holiday poems of the same theme, and or seasonal poetry for Autumn! :)
This is a very strong example, is this your first one? ...
Hugs, Liz
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Oct 22 06, 17:47
QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Oct 22 06, 18:27 ) 
Hi Lori...
This is very powerful. I would say it would work quite well for the introduction to Holiday poems of the same theme, and or seasonal poetry for Autumn! :)
This is a very strong example, is this your first one? ...
Hugs, Liz
QUOTE
Souls
Samhain
celebrate
faith's sacrifice
dead
Samhain
celebrate
faith's sacrifice
dead
This is very powerful. I would say it would work quite well for the introduction to Holiday poems of the same theme, and or seasonal poetry for Autumn! :)
This is a very strong example, is this your first one? ...
Hugs, Liz
Hi Liz.
Yes, this was my first Lanturne. I had All Hallows Eve on my mind.
Thanks for your lovely compliment! 
Here's another:
Leaves
tumble
ground cover
speckled sienna...
Fall
and another (these are fun)
Witch
broomstick
pentacle
casting of spells
charmed
Leaves
tumble
ground cover
speckled sienna...
Fall
and another (these are fun)
Witch
broomstick
pentacle
casting of spells
charmed
Posted by: JustDaniel Oct 22 06, 18:31
Addiction has begun!leaves
flipping
turn yellow
'neath dog-ear'd tale
book
Posted by: JustDaniel Oct 24 06, 15:14
Nefertiti
Miz
who is
creative
not miscreant
Beth
Miz
who is
creative
not miscreant
Beth
Posted by: Cathy Oct 30 06, 10:11
Scares
are near,
so beware
this Hallowed Eve.
Boo!
Happy Halloween all!
are near,
so beware
this Hallowed Eve.
Boo!
Happy Halloween all!
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Jun 17 07, 11:49
Buds
flourish
blanketing
stems with dappled
blooms
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 1 07, 17:39
O
l
bright
lanturnes
will soon light
Elizabeth's
porch
l
bright
lanturnes
will soon light
Elizabeth's
porch
Posted by: AMETHYST Jul 1 07, 19:05
Ah ... Yes, I did try one on for size! Thank you Daniel for the lovely light to brighten my entry! I will have to do a few more of these ...
Best to you, Liz
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 1 07, 19:21
You're welcome. I'd noted that you were about to review the params for the form, so I thought I'd offer another flicker to spark your re-entry!
hang
a round
till the dawn
has lit upon
yew
a round
till the dawn
has lit upon
yew
Lightly, Daniel
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis May 23 08, 09:41
Bulbs
blossom
garnishing
nature’s palette
Spring
Posted by: AMETHYST Jun 11 08, 19:12
Hey Lori,
This is very vivid. I liked how L1/L5 off set one another, bulb/spring and how you've allowed each line to grow into a whole image. For a very short form, you've painted a very crisp picture. :)
Nicely done. Hugs, Liz
Posted by: Cleo_Serapis Jun 12 08, 05:32
Thanks Liz - I've posted this one for crits over at Shogun's if you have any further thoughts.
Cheers
~Cleo 
Posted by: JustDaniel Sep 6 09, 15:58
lips
provide
impression
poet needs back
talk
© Daniel J Ricketts 26 Feb 2005
provide
impression
poet needs back
talk
© Daniel J Ricketts 26 Feb 2005
Posted by: JustDaniel Sep 14 11, 07:06
two
sparse years
spread out 'twixt
our responses
now
sparse years
spread out 'twixt
our responses
now
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 25 12, 10:49
form
the sounds
to make words
reveal your light
style
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 9 12, 08:08
work
requires
focus-time
but don't forget
fun
Posted by: Larry Apr 9 12, 09:57
Hot
Summers
contravene,
like tails wagging
dogs.
Summers
contravene,
like tails wagging
dogs.
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 9 12, 10:20
thwart
the heat
with a fan;
see the dog's tail
wag
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
the heat
with a fan;
see the dog's tail
wag
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
Posted by: Alan Apr 10 12, 02:01
By way of acknowledging Will.I.Am of the Hot Chilli Pepper's creative use of his forename :
Dan.
I.El
lights lanturnes
at drop of hat
bright
Alan
I.El
lights lanturnes
at drop of hat
bright
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 10 12, 11:44
hats
cover
ideas
that need the light
share
Posted by: Larry Apr 10 12, 13:42
Share
old words
with others,
rearranged by
thoughts.
old words
with others,
rearranged by
thoughts.
Posted by: Alan Apr 10 12, 13:48
thoughts
through mind
mined meanings
leanings revealed
mind !
Alan
through mind
mined meanings
leanings revealed
mind !
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 10 12, 13:56
Mind
and heart
understand
what lips never
say.
and heart
understand
what lips never
say.
Posted by: Alan Apr 10 12, 14:01
TRUTH
say
what's dared/
what is true/
gotten away
with
Alan
say
what's dared/
what is true/
gotten away
with
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 10 12, 14:14
Just a reminder, from the opening page of this thread, re 'lanturne':
QUOTE
Generally, each line is a self-contained statement, such that the poem is not merely a sentence arbitrarily divided into syllables. Some suggest that the form should begin with a noun, with line 2 giving an action or description of the noun and lines 3 & 4 each giving a further description, and the 5th line offering another word for the noun, though not necessarily a synonym or even a noun. The form may or may not have a title, but it can be an integral part as the ‘sixth line’ of the poem.
snuffed lanturne
bard
hanging
strung out words
a death sentence
choked
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
bard
hanging
strung out words
a death sentence
choked
© MLee Dickens'son 2012
Posted by: Alan Apr 16 12, 16:29
choked
strong words
emotions
hung out to dry
iced
Alan
strong words
emotions
hung out to dry
iced
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 16 12, 22:52
brood
ice-teased
with steeped words
the poet's thoughts
pour
ice-teased
with steeped words
the poet's thoughts
pour
Posted by: Larry Apr 17 12, 08:51
pores
exhude
cool bodies
waist removal
sweat
exhude
cool bodies
waist removal
sweat
Posted by: Alan Apr 17 12, 15:46
sweat
can pour
from forehead
concentration
'spired
Alan
can pour
from forehead
concentration
'spired
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 18 12, 08:41
spires
reach up
touching hearts
iconic aim
point
Posted by: Alan Apr 18 12, 10:32
point
at sky
fluffy clouds
followed by rain
see ?
Alan
at sky
fluffy clouds
followed by rain
see ?
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 18 12, 13:39
sea
whispers
good morning
announcing hi
tide
whispers
good morning
announcing hi
tide
Posted by: Alan Apr 19 12, 03:08
tied
fessled
imprisoned
done up in knots
dyed
or
tried
in car
serrated
metal prison
cell
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 19 12, 13:54
Sell
your lure
telephone
applications
cost
or
dyed
in wool
sheep's clothing
do not fit wolf's
bane
your lure
telephone
applications
cost
or
dyed
in wool
sheep's clothing
do not fit wolf's
bane
Posted by: Alan Apr 19 12, 14:21
bay
a moon
optimism
with girl on arm
wolf
Alan
a moon
optimism
with girl on arm
wolf
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 20 12, 16:45
wool
over
the girl's eyes
made the wolf think
baa
over
the girl's eyes
made the wolf think
baa
Posted by: Alan Apr 21 12, 13:58
baa
humbug
I tell you
fest'ring season
scrooge
Alan
humbug
I tell you
fest'ring season
scrooge
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 21 12, 14:37
scrounge
borrow
solicit
something might help
work
borrow
solicit
something might help
work
Posted by: Alan Apr 22 12, 01:57
work
or play
all the same
time consumers
slave
Alan
or play
all the same
time consumers
slave
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 22 12, 09:09
shave
faces
tempting fate
work 'till the scythe
cuts
faces
tempting fate
work 'till the scythe
cuts
Posted by: Alan Apr 22 12, 12:28
cats
adore
stand-offish
take or leave me
purr
Alan
adore
stand-offish
take or leave me
purr
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 22 12, 18:26
pur
he cast
determined
his onlookers'
fate
he cast
determined
his onlookers'
fate
Posted by: Larry Apr 23 12, 10:07
Fate
decides
the future
you can select
now
decides
the future
you can select
now
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 23 12, 10:21
now
decide
your own fate
application's
blank
decide
your own fate
application's
blank
Posted by: Alan Apr 23 12, 11:52
blank
his face
and his mind
successful drug
use
Alan
his face
and his mind
successful drug
use
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 23 12, 15:51
use
cocaine
for nostrils
to be useless
soon
cocaine
for nostrils
to be useless
soon
Posted by: Larry Apr 24 12, 08:57
sewn
septums
sound slightly
sibilant since
speed
septums
sound slightly
sibilant since
speed
Posted by: Alan Apr 24 12, 09:09
speed
essence
motor-car
on Nurburgring
round
Alan
essence
motor-car
on Nurburgring
round
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 24 12, 10:05
wound
tightly
tension builds
nervous breakdowns
watch
tightly
tension builds
nervous breakdowns
watch
Posted by: Alan Apr 24 12, 11:18
watch
the springs
rewind mode
metallic clangs
see ?
Alan
the springs
rewind mode
metallic clangs
see ?
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 24 12, 11:51
Sea
surges
sending sand
susurrating
soft
surges
sending sand
susurrating
soft
Posted by: Alan Apr 24 12, 12:37
soft
who's there
door-keeper
what wantest thou
sleep
Alan
who's there
door-keeper
what wantest thou
sleep
Alan
Posted by: Larry Apr 24 12, 17:10
sleep
freshens
relaxes
eases the mind
rests
freshens
relaxes
eases the mind
rests
Posted by: Alan Apr 24 12, 17:49
rests
for cues
the entry
gladiators
pause
Alan
for cues
the entry
gladiators
pause
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 24 12, 22:07
paws
and claws
give one pause
feathers and fur
fly
and claws
give one pause
feathers and fur
fly
Posted by: Alan Apr 25 12, 04:07
fly
virgin
great feeling
quite orgasmic
high
Alan
virgin
great feeling
quite orgasmic
high
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 25 12, 08:06
high
atop
the Andes
breathing in coke
air
atop
the Andes
breathing in coke
air
Posted by: Larry Apr 25 12, 08:58
air
diverse
opinions
with a whisper
calm
diverse
opinions
with a whisper
calm
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 25 12, 10:49
clam
clamps down
on fingers
interposing
shell
clamps down
on fingers
interposing
shell
Posted by: Alan Apr 25 12, 16:36
deleted
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 26 12, 04:40
like
come on
friend Alan;
honor the form
please?
come on
friend Alan;
honor the form
please?
Posted by: Larry Apr 26 12, 09:23
pleas
in form
that lanturnes
material
eyes
in form
that lanturnes
material
eyes
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 26 12, 12:29
ayes
have it
when they move
to end it all
now
have it
when they move
to end it all
now
Posted by: Larry Apr 26 12, 13:12
know
the ends
justify
demeans in some
form
the ends
justify
demeans in some
form
Posted by: Alan Apr 27 12, 00:31
form
idea
refinement
final collapse
smash
Alan
idea
refinement
final collapse
smash
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 27 12, 08:22
smash
the form's
syllables
by discounting
them
the form's
syllables
by discounting
them
Posted by: Larry Apr 27 12, 08:56
them
and us
mispronounce
certain words a
lot
and us
mispronounce
certain words a
lot
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 27 12, 09:36
Lot's
poor wife
was quite stoned
wishing Sodom
back
poor wife
was quite stoned
wishing Sodom
back
Posted by: Larry Apr 27 12, 16:30
back
assault
mined a lot
shake her foolish
act
assault
mined a lot
shake her foolish
act
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 27 12, 17:54
facts
scream out
of someone
greater than I
somewhere
scream out
of someone
greater than I
somewhere
Posted by: Larry Apr 30 12, 00:23
some-
where's one
syllable
that's also smashed
in
where's one
syllable
that's also smashed
in
Posted by: Alan Apr 30 12, 02:42
in
vino
veritas
but in water
truth
Alan
vino
veritas
but in water
truth
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel Apr 30 12, 09:14
truth
has one
syllable
a powerful
one
has one
syllable
a powerful
one
Posted by: Alan May 1 12, 03:52
one
a day
with a meal
ratlling around
out
Alan
a day
with a meal
ratlling around
out
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 1 12, 12:13
out
houses
with half-moons
alleviate
breath
houses
with half-moons
alleviate
breath
Posted by: JustDaniel May 1 12, 17:48
breathe
deeply
and you'll choke
at an out house
dump
Posted by: Alan May 2 12, 08:58
dump
deeply
and you'll choke
on an out house
breath
is equally true, no ?
Alan
deeply
and you'll choke
on an out house
breath
is equally true, no ?
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 2 12, 10:47
breath
becomes
quite precious
when you have been
choked
becomes
quite precious
when you have been
choked
Posted by: Larry May 4 12, 15:56
chocked
cables
take a bight
loose ship with slack
slips
cables
take a bight
loose ship with slack
slips
Posted by: JustDaniel May 4 12, 23:03
sips
soda
through his tongue
to spit it back
out
soda
through his tongue
to spit it back
out
Posted by: Larry May 6 12, 23:54
out
from mouths
of sages
and sometimes babes
pours a suprising wisdom yet
known
from mouths
of sages
and sometimes babes
pours a suprising wisdom yet
known
Posted by: JustDaniel May 7 12, 07:42
gnomes
surround
her garden;
they're guardin' her
plants
surround
her garden;
they're guardin' her
plants
Posted by: Alan May 9 12, 08:22
plant
a kiss
duck her response
she will come round quite soon
flow'r
Alan
a kiss
duck her response
she will come round quite soon
flow'r
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 9 12, 08:29
foul,
Alan!
syllables
have multiplied
wow!
Alan!
syllables
have multiplied
wow!
Posted by: Alan May 9 12, 10:04
Fowl,
Daniel ?
It is half
a damn cinquain !
BIRD !
Alan
plant
a kiss
duck response
she'll come round soon
flow'r
Alan
Daniel ?
It is half
a damn cinquain !
BIRD !
Alan
plant
a kiss
duck response
she'll come round soon
flow'r
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 9 12, 10:50
bird-
flipping?
I am shocked!
second version
fine
flipping?
I am shocked!
second version
fine
Posted by: Alan May 9 12, 13:12
fine ?
impost
not O.K.
gentle ribbing
light
Alan
impost
not O.K.
gentle ribbing
light
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 9 12, 13:28
light
impost
won't break you
dig down deeply
pay
impost
won't break you
dig down deeply
pay
Posted by: Larry May 9 12, 15:22
pay
pipers
filling bags
before kilties
squeeze
pipers
filling bags
before kilties
squeeze
Posted by: Alan May 9 12, 16:13
squeeze
sports box
no effect
balls still fly straight
press ?
Alan
sports box
no effect
balls still fly straight
press ?
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 10 12, 12:22
press
to iron
the wrinkles
of truth, adding
twists
to iron
the wrinkles
of truth, adding
twists
Posted by: Alan May 10 12, 16:51
twists
and turns
fates conspire
perfect outcome
whirls
Alan
and turns
fates conspire
perfect outcome
whirls
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 10 12, 17:41
whorls
spiral
on paper
to convolute
prints
Posted by: Alan May 11 12, 00:38
prince
showgirl
pre-ordained
togetherness
snap !
Alan
showgirl
pre-ordained
togetherness
snap !
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 11 12, 07:43
snap
opens
revealing
embryonic
thought
Posted by: Alan May 11 12, 08:59
thought
thinking
mull over
contemplation
nah ....
Alan
thinking
mull over
contemplation
nah ....
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 11 12, 10:05
gnaw
away
at your thoughts
until you find
naught
away
at your thoughts
until you find
naught
Posted by: Larry May 11 12, 13:30
aught
with thought
lest you're caught
with naught on your
mind
with thought
lest you're caught
with naught on your
mind
Posted by: Alan May 11 12, 15:45
mind
peas queues
be British
stiff upper lip
blink
Alan
peas queues
be British
stiff upper lip
blink
Alan
Edited Alan
Posted by: Larry May 12 12, 09:35
blink
your eyes
syllables
for lanturnes, not
words
your eyes
syllables
for lanturnes, not
words
Sorry Alan, but I had to gig you about your last post.
Posted by: Alan May 12 12, 09:38
words
away
run with me
out for the count
sylls
Alan
away
run with me
out for the count
sylls
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 12 12, 13:37
sylphs
female
imagined
elemental
sprites
female
imagined
elemental
sprites
Posted by: Alan May 13 12, 03:30
Sprite
cola
or soda
for obesity
drink
Alan
cola
or soda
for obesity
drink
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 13 12, 08:41
drink
deeply
slake your thirst
diuretics
don't
deeply
slake your thirst
diuretics
don't
Posted by: Alan May 13 12, 11:41
don't
start me
on diet
guaanteed fat
sad
Alan
start me
on diet
guaanteed fat
sad
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 14 12, 13:30
sad
but true
calories
enlarge numbers
scaled
but true
calories
enlarge numbers
scaled
Posted by: Alan May 14 12, 23:38
scaled
fishes
Everest
confused the two ?
scold
Alan
fishes
Everest
confused the two ?
scold
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 15 12, 09:26
scald
fingers
in hot water
with the kitchen
chef
fingers
in hot water
with the kitchen
chef
Posted by: Larry May 15 12, 13:53
chaff
at bits
and pieces
blown by fickle
winds
at bits
and pieces
blown by fickle
winds
Posted by: JustDaniel May 15 12, 14:45
wind
it up
in a roll
to squeeze the rag
dry
it up
in a roll
to squeeze the rag
dry
Posted by: Alan May 15 12, 23:52
dry
water
is absent
whisky therefore
pure
Alan
water
is absent
whisky therefore
pure
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 16 12, 04:05
pur
that's cast
could be die
both of them are
dice
that's cast
could be die
both of them are
dice
Posted by: Alan May 16 12, 07:14
dies
or lives
perhaps both
one at a time ?
days
Alan
or lives
perhaps both
one at a time ?
days
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 16 12, 10:10
daze
confuse
with word play
carefully in
fog
confuse
with word play
carefully in
fog
Posted by: JustDaniel May 16 12, 10:30
frog
quiet
'til he jumps
to conclusion
croaks
Posted by: Larry May 16 12, 15:59
crock
falsehood
in this guise
camouflaged words
crack
falsehood
in this guise
camouflaged words
crack
Posted by: JustDaniel May 17 12, 00:22
crack
cocaine
can grab you
before you wake
up
cocaine
can grab you
before you wake
up
Posted by: Alan May 17 12, 03:03
up
your nose
there it goes
insult offered
in
Alan
your nose
there it goes
insult offered
in
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 17 12, 06:16
inn
opens
to offer
its travelers
sleep
opens
to offer
its travelers
sleep
Posted by: Larry May 17 12, 10:19
sleep
and dream
you're awake
reality
taps
and dream
you're awake
reality
taps
Posted by: Alan May 17 12, 16:23
taps
running
your nightmare
in technicolor
turn
Alan
running
your nightmare
in technicolor
turn
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 17 12, 16:47
torn
between
two lovers
the wet blanket
split
between
two lovers
the wet blanket
split
Posted by: Alan May 17 12, 17:10
splat
goes fly
against wall
my newspaper
read
Alan
goes fly
against wall
my newspaper
read
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 18 12, 00:19
reed
swaying
protruding
from reflection
bent
swaying
protruding
from reflection
bent
Posted by: Alan May 18 12, 04:22
bent
was he ?
the perfect
young Narcissus
weird
Alan
was he ?
the perfect
young Narcissus
weird
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 18 12, 08:14
weird
British
transition
nature's scene goes
poof
British
transition
nature's scene goes
poof
Posted by: JustDaniel May 18 12, 13:35
poo
Boston
terrier
nowhere to go
banned
Boston
terrier
nowhere to go
banned
Posted by: Larry May 18 12, 15:32
bound
bowels
won't obey
use grass or ground
floor
bowels
won't obey
use grass or ground
floor
Posted by: JustDaniel May 19 12, 10:25
floor
neighbors
by pooing
in their back yard
pool
neighbors
by pooing
in their back yard
pool
Posted by: Larry May 19 12, 15:23
pool
filters
can't handle
floating debris
drain
filters
can't handle
floating debris
drain
Posted by: JustDaniel May 19 12, 19:06
darn
filters
spoil the fun
by lightening
hue
filters
spoil the fun
by lightening
hue
Posted by: Alan May 20 12, 01:45
phew
escaped
fate worse than.
procreation
off
Alan
escaped
fate worse than.
procreation
off
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 21 12, 07:54
Off
keeps 'em
from bitin'
while y're in them
woods
keeps 'em
from bitin'
while y're in them
woods
Posted by: Alan May 21 12, 12:29
woods
and irons
rights and duties
domestica-
shun !
Alan
and irons
rights and duties
domestica-
shun !
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 21 12, 15:10
shun
ish hot
if yer shmashed
alcoholics
spurn
ish hot
if yer shmashed
alcoholics
spurn
Posted by: Alan May 22 12, 00:27
spurn
me knot
marriage
is not for us
spun
Alan
me knot
marriage
is not for us
spun
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 22 12, 08:58
puns
play words
against norm
for humor's sake
...groans
play words
against norm
for humor's sake
...groans
Posted by: Larry May 22 12, 11:54
grown
to groan
at miscues
following suite
played
to groan
at miscues
following suite
played
DISREGARD
organs
are instruments
activated by air
which result in delightful sounds
when played
Will move to cinquain thread soon!
organs
are instruments
activated by air
which result in delightful sounds
when played
Will move to cinquain thread soon!
Posted by: JustDaniel May 22 12, 12:13
plaid
cinquains
are lanturnes
with mixed criss-cross
grins
cinquains
are lanturnes
with mixed criss-cross
grins
Posted by: Alan May 22 12, 12:47
grins
faces'
convulsion
best humour them
smile
Alan
faces'
convulsion
best humour them
smile
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 22 12, 13:33
miles
to go
before sheep
have their last laugh
baa
to go
before sheep
have their last laugh
baa
Posted by: Alan May 22 12, 15:47
baa'ed
replies
essential
essence of sheep
stew
Alan
replies
essential
essence of sheep
stew
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 22 12, 16:46
's too
much ewe
and mutton
will best nothin'
beef
much ewe
and mutton
will best nothin'
beef
Posted by: Larry May 22 12, 23:02
beef
grumble
bellyache
sheep shots get my
goat
grumble
bellyache
sheep shots get my
goat
Posted by: Alan May 22 12, 23:24
got
to get
a must-have
an essential
mote
Alan
to get
a must-have
an essential
mote
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 22 12, 23:38
note
letter
supplement
important things
sung
letter
supplement
important things
sung
Posted by: JustDaniel May 23 12, 00:34
snug
as bugs
in a rug?
tell me how that
feels
as bugs
in a rug?
tell me how that
feels
Posted by: Alan May 23 12, 00:44
fails
dullard
a screw loose
short of picnic
starves
Alan
dullard
a screw loose
short of picnic
starves
Alan
Posted by: Larry May 23 12, 15:14
scarfs
wrap up
decorate
without choking
style
wrap up
decorate
without choking
style
Posted by: JustDaniel May 24 12, 15:35
stile
in fence
neighborly
without freeing
sheep
in fence
neighborly
without freeing
sheep
Posted by: Larry May 24 12, 23:58
sleep
and dream
you're skiing
behind your yacht's
wake
and dream
you're skiing
behind your yacht's
wake
Posted by: Alan May 25 12, 01:30
wake
in dreams
sort problems
for better world
dream
Alan
in dreams
sort problems
for better world
dream
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 25 12, 07:56
deem
extreme
seraphim
as your regime
team
Posted by: Alan May 25 12, 08:15
team
building
really needs
showers installed
now
Alan
building
really needs
showers installed
now
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 25 12, 08:28
know
yourself
or at least
look in the still
pool
yourself
or at least
look in the still
pool
Posted by: Larry May 25 12, 08:34
pool
by still
gets you drunk
condensation
drips
by still
gets you drunk
condensation
drips
Posted by: JustDaniel May 25 12, 08:36
trips
to school
because drunk
from Larry's still
pool
to school
because drunk
from Larry's still
pool
Posted by: Larry May 25 12, 08:50
pull
yourself
away from
my still water
fall
yourself
away from
my still water
fall
Posted by: JustDaniel May 25 12, 09:11
fill
my cup
from your still
I'll not become
drunk
my cup
from your still
I'll not become
drunk
Posted by: Larry May 25 12, 22:19
dunk
doughnuts
in your cup
and eyes will be
glazed
doughnuts
in your cup
and eyes will be
glazed
Posted by: Alan May 26 12, 03:56
glazed
double
v. temptation
imbibe from glass
sloshed
Alan
double
v. temptation
imbibe from glass
sloshed
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 26 12, 10:02
sloshed
doughnuts
get soggy
make your coffee
blah
doughnuts
get soggy
make your coffee
blah
Posted by: Alan May 26 12, 23:02
blah
TV
interspersed
with blah blah blah
deep
Alan
TV
interspersed
with blah blah blah
deep
Alan
Posted by: JustDaniel May 27 12, 07:47
dip
fingers
in clear thought
to transcribe it
well
fingers
in clear thought
to transcribe it
well
Posted by: Larry May 27 12, 15:02
whale
watchers
glimpse moments
letters from long
tales
watchers
glimpse moments
letters from long
tales
Posted by: JustDaniel May 28 12, 11:34
tills
empty
when patrons
cannot purchase
goods
empty
when patrons
cannot purchase
goods
Posted by: Larry May 29 12, 23:40
goods
offered
customers
stay when both are
poor
offered
customers
stay when both are
poor
Posted by: JustDaniel May 30 12, 07:42
pour
a drink
for parched lips
and they will speak
thanks
a drink
for parched lips
and they will speak
thanks
Posted by: Larry May 30 12, 14:31
thanks
are rare
as jewels
and you're welcome
too
are rare
as jewels
and you're welcome
too
Posted by: JustDaniel May 30 12, 19:19
two
become
one when wed
and soon may be
three
become
one when wed
and soon may be
three
Posted by: Larry May 31 12, 14:21
three
may be
family
but can be a
crowd
may be
family
but can be a
crowd
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 1 12, 10:53
crowed
blackbird
will you please
leave me a loan
app
blackbird
will you please
leave me a loan
app
Posted by: Larry Jun 1 12, 14:07
apt
response
for money
is work to earn
sum
response
for money
is work to earn
sum
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 4 12, 08:47
some
people
tend to be
quite inhuman
folk
people
tend to be
quite inhuman
folk
Posted by: Larry Jun 5 12, 13:30
fake
grifters
clear thousands
homeless suffer
'cause
grifters
clear thousands
homeless suffer
'cause
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 6 12, 07:58
Claus
still lives
way up north
with his free-rein
dear
still lives
way up north
with his free-rein
dear
Posted by: Larry Jun 6 12, 14:04
dour
skeptic
claws Christmas
free enterprise
reigns
skeptic
claws Christmas
free enterprise
reigns
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 6 12, 16:00
rains
all week
at Rainier
from Tacoma's
clouds
all week
at Rainier
from Tacoma's
clouds
Posted by: Larry Jun 12 12, 08:41
clods
of dirt
were mountains
before water's
touch
of dirt
were mountains
before water's
touch
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 12 12, 10:37
tick
bit me;
it's sub-Lyme
fortunately
Phew!
bit me;
it's sub-Lyme
fortunately
Phew!
Posted by: Larry Jun 12 12, 16:29
phew
remains
with the pew
mixing incense
scents
remains
with the pew
mixing incense
scents
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 12 12, 19:35
since
incense
makes ascent
to your senses
breathe
incense
makes ascent
to your senses
breathe
Posted by: Larry Jun 15 12, 13:36
breathe
deeply
scented smoke
insensitives
scoff
deeply
scented smoke
insensitives
scoff
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 15 12, 17:34
scuff
your boots
while climbing
to the hilltop
rest
your boots
while climbing
to the hilltop
rest
Posted by: Larry Jun 18 12, 00:05
wrest
the best
from the rest
who now possess
less
the best
from the rest
who now possess
less
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 26 12, 07:37
Les
Moreland
married Jane
so he'd have more
land
Moreland
married Jane
so he'd have more
land
Posted by: Larry Jun 27 12, 15:28
land
dowries
are grants for
brides ugly as
dirt
dowries
are grants for
brides ugly as
dirt
Posted by: JustDaniel Jun 29 12, 13:18
dirt
added
to water
can make your name
Mud
added
to water
can make your name
Mud
Posted by: Larry Jul 1 12, 13:39
mud
facials
cleanse the skin
when you wash it
off
facials
cleanse the skin
when you wash it
off
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 2 12, 08:38
http://www.drugstore.com/search/search_results.asp?Ntk=All&srchtree=5&Ntt=off!&aid=336064&aparam=off%20bug%20spray&scinit1=off%20bug%20spray
keeps bugs
off your skin
uless you are
me
keeps bugs
off your skin
uless you are
me
Posted by: Larry Jul 2 12, 16:32
meet
new deet
cook up some
chrysanthemum
seeds
new deet
cook up some
chrysanthemum
seeds
Daniel, it really works! The Pyrethrins, found in the seed casing, attack the nervous systems of all insects, and inhibit female mosquitoes from biting. When not present in amounts fatal to insects, they still appear to have an insect repellent effect.
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 3 12, 07:39
seethe
in rage
over bugs
that must induce
pain
in rage
over bugs
that must induce
pain
Posted by: Larry Jul 3 12, 15:03
pain
from bites
or the sting
of the killing
slap
from bites
or the sting
of the killing
slap
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 3 12, 17:31
slip
Mickey
a green finn
and you'll swim for
daze
Mickey
a green finn
and you'll swim for
daze
Posted by: Larry Jul 5 12, 23:12
days
heat up
in summer
'till equinox
fall
heat up
in summer
'till equinox
fall
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 6 12, 09:04
full
monty
in Sheffield
was a comic
strip
monty
in Sheffield
was a comic
strip
Posted by: Larry Jul 7 12, 16:16
striped
clothing
is given
streakers who are
barred
clothing
is given
streakers who are
barred
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 8 12, 20:22
bard
rephrased
his tombstone
before he dyed
slate
rephrased
his tombstone
before he dyed
slate
Posted by: Larry Jul 9 12, 16:14
'slate
mumbled
the old drunk
who was plastered
schist
mumbled
the old drunk
who was plastered
schist
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 9 12, 18:33
schist
was formed
when his rocks
suddenly went
off
was formed
when his rocks
suddenly went
off
Posted by: Larry Jul 10 12, 12:09
off
colored
five liners
are humerus
bones
colored
five liners
are humerus
bones
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 12 12, 07:05
buns
hot-crossed
with a whip
can lacerate
tongue
hot-crossed
with a whip
can lacerate
tongue
Posted by: Larry Jul 12 12, 10:40
tongues
sharpened
by wit stones
slice vain ego's
wurst
sharpened
by wit stones
slice vain ego's
wurst
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 12 12, 12:59
warts
can grow
anywhere
from a virus
sprite
can grow
anywhere
from a virus
sprite
Posted by: Larry Jul 13 12, 08:42
sprit
sale pants
fore and aft
taking a bow
‘spar
sale pants
fore and aft
taking a bow
‘spar
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 14 12, 07:45
spare
challenge
takes last week;
none welcomed me
back
challenge
takes last week;
none welcomed me
back
Posted by: Larry Jul 15 12, 15:56
back
"at you's"
challenge me
I'm glad you are
here
"at you's"
challenge me
I'm glad you are
here
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 15 12, 17:25
there
below
no challenge
brings a response
yet
below
no challenge
brings a response
yet
Posted by: Larry Jul 19 12, 11:25
yet
again
I question
where's the challenge
at
again
I question
where's the challenge
at
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 19 12, 14:36
at
bottom
who will care
where the challenge
is?
bottom
who will care
where the challenge
is?
Posted by: Larry Jul 19 12, 15:58
'is
and 'ers
are concerned
when they bottom
out
and 'ers
are concerned
when they bottom
out
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 20 12, 08:55
out-
sourcing's
a nyt - nyt
makes the US
red
sourcing's
a nyt - nyt
makes the US
red
Posted by: Larry Jul 21 12, 15:22
red
faces
embarrassed
fabricating
cents
faces
embarrassed
fabricating
cents
Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 23 12, 09:03
scents
blossom
from roses
to fill the night
air
Posted by: Larry Aug 6 12, 23:49
heir
incensed
rises from
no blossoming
wealth
incensed
rises from
no blossoming
wealth
Posted by: JustDaniel Aug 7 12, 07:51
welsh
on bets
and your knees
may soon become
stiff
on bets
and your knees
may soon become
stiff
Posted by: Larry Aug 9 12, 13:56
stiff
waiters
and the tip
may be a plate
launch
waiters
and the tip
may be a plate
launch
Posted by: JustDaniel Aug 10 12, 07:29
lunch
special:
leave a tip
or simply leave
life
Posted by: Larry Aug 16 12, 14:45
life
and limns
illustrate
when they're filled with
thanks
and limns
illustrate
when they're filled with
thanks
Posted by: JustDaniel Aug 20 12, 07:58
thanks
for friends
whom I need;
work's suspended
me
for friends
whom I need;
work's suspended
me
Posted by: Larry Aug 22 12, 00:16
me
and mine
are thankful
for what we have
now
and mine
are thankful
for what we have
now
Posted by: JustDaniel Aug 22 12, 12:18
noun
labeled
improper
left Capitol
sad
labeled
improper
left Capitol
sad
Posted by: Larry Aug 25 12, 16:10
sad
congress
dug a hole
constituents
raped
congress
dug a hole
constituents
raped
Posted by: JustDaniel Aug 28 12, 08:18
rape
labeled
quite strangely
legitimate
ired
labeled
quite strangely
legitimate
ired
Posted by: Larry Sep 3 12, 15:35
erred
with quote
of study
election chance
screwed
with quote
of study
election chance
screwed
Posted by: JustDaniel Sep 5 12, 07:34
screw
tightens
bored for board
in rooming house
bed
tightens
bored for board
in rooming house
bed
Posted by: Larry Sep 5 12, 18:40
bed
hopping
wears them out
they all lose their
spring
hopping
wears them out
they all lose their
spring
Posted by: JustDaniel Sep 6 12, 11:51
spring
to life
in the morn
with the rising
sun
to life
in the morn
with the rising
sun
Posted by: Larry Sep 9 12, 23:41
sun
rises
through the storm
thunder makes cake
fall
rises
through the storm
thunder makes cake
fall
Posted by: JustDaniel Sep 17 12, 07:56
fill
buckets
with the rain
from over-night
storm
buckets
with the rain
from over-night
storm
Posted by: Larry Sep 17 12, 14:42
storm
waters
helped me flush
through hurricane's
waste
waters
helped me flush
through hurricane's
waste
Posted by: JustDaniel Sep 18 12, 10:46
waist
will grow
with each gulp
that thinks that fat's
free
Posted by: Larry Oct 2 12, 08:57
free
floating
radicals
will not un-pear
hips
floating
radicals
will not un-pear
hips
Posted by: JustDaniel Oct 2 12, 17:38
hype
about
trimming fat
carries little
weight
Posted by: Larry Oct 4 12, 14:12
wait
between
every bite
chew wants or needs
choose
between
every bite
chew wants or needs
choose
Posted by: JustDaniel Oct 8 12, 16:33
chews
between
what you bite
can make you feel
thin
between
what you bite
can make you feel
thin
Posted by: Larry Oct 11 12, 00:27
thin
portions
of good pie
will still make you
thick
portions
of good pie
will still make you
thick
Posted by: JustDaniel Nov 4 12, 08:55
sick?
not I !
my birthday
was on your last
post
not I !
my birthday
was on your last
post
Posted by: Larry Nov 7 12, 14:37
passed
birthday
greetings and
salutations
then
birthday
greetings and
salutations
then
Posted by: JustDaniel Nov 16 12, 17:40
thin
is past
fat chance now
that I'll become
lithe
is past
fat chance now
that I'll become
lithe
Posted by: Larry Nov 20 12, 15:46
lithes
were told
to onself
about diet
lisps
were told
to onself
about diet
lisps
Posted by: JustDaniel Nov 22 12, 12:42
wisps
of smoke
represent
my plans to lose
wait
of smoke
represent
my plans to lose
wait
Posted by: Larry Nov 27 12, 11:06
weight
is caused
by your arms
when the elbows
bend
is caused
by your arms
when the elbows
bend
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 1 12, 08:51
bent
on loss
my legs work
more than my gut
churns
on loss
my legs work
more than my gut
churns
Posted by: Larry Dec 3 12, 08:51
churns
will turn
milquetoast wants
into buttered
feat
will turn
milquetoast wants
into buttered
feat
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 3 12, 12:16
feet
throbbing
from standing
at last evening's
fête
throbbing
from standing
at last evening's
fête
Posted by: Larry Dec 5 12, 11:01
fate
fortune
and sore feet
meet at party's
end
fortune
and sore feet
meet at party's
end
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 7 12, 15:35
wend
your way
through this thread
to find balanced
quips
your way
through this thread
to find balanced
quips
Posted by: Larry Dec 7 12, 23:12
quits
reading
to fathom
underlying
thoughts
reading
to fathom
underlying
thoughts
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 9 12, 17:42
thoughts
sewn in
to wrinkles
for the lanterns'
hues
sewn in
to wrinkles
for the lanterns'
hues
Posted by: Larry Dec 10 12, 00:27
hue
and cry
still echoes
through empty halls
bored
and cry
still echoes
through empty halls
bored
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 18 12, 14:28
bored
members
find meetings
ill-attended
oft
members
find meetings
ill-attended
oft
Posted by: Larry Dec 21 12, 12:49
offed
muses
shouldn't stop
the pro and con
fused
muses
shouldn't stop
the pro and con
fused
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 28 12, 02:57
fizzed
muses
don't give light
though they delight
selves
muses
don't give light
though they delight
selves
Posted by: Larry Dec 30 12, 00:32
shelves
of books
left unread
gathering dust
motes
of books
left unread
gathering dust
motes
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 30 12, 07:02
smote
problem;
built more shelves
for now-dusted
books
problem;
built more shelves
for now-dusted
books
[Actually, last week I DID build a new 8-foot X 3-foot shelving unit with 8-inch 5/4" pine, inset the shelves, stained it walnut and polyurethane and then screwed it into the wall through the backing I attached to the upper shelves. I was tired of the make-shift set-up that I had with an old end-table and manufactured 3-shelf unit on which everything was double-stacked and couldn't be accessed.]
Posted by: Larry Dec 30 12, 08:52
backs
aligned
orderly
accessible
neat
aligned
orderly
accessible
neat
Posted by: JustDaniel Dec 30 12, 13:07
neat
for books
to be found;
wish eyesight were
clear
for books
to be found;
wish eyesight were
clear
Posted by: Larry Jan 1 13, 01:00
clear
plastic
eight by ten
magnifying
glass
plastic
eight by ten
magnifying
glass
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 1 13, 01:31
glass
eyeballs
may be next;
I'll settle for
blur
eyeballs
may be next;
I'll settle for
blur
Posted by: Larry Jan 1 13, 01:36
blurred
vision
is better
than no sight at
all
vision
is better
than no sight at
all
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 1 13, 07:06
tall
liar
not better
than being short
tale
liar
not better
than being short
tale
Posted by: Larry Jan 1 13, 12:49
tell
stories
concisely
with minimal
words
stories
concisely
with minimal
words
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 1 13, 15:49
wards
of court
find new homes
for holiday
peace
of court
find new homes
for holiday
peace
Posted by: Larry Jan 1 13, 18:54
piece
of life
was their due
now they're Christmas
gifts
of life
was their due
now they're Christmas
gifts
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 4 13, 17:20
sift
through dirt
to find bones
of contention
trash
through dirt
to find bones
of contention
trash
Posted by: Larry Jan 6 13, 14:37
trash
thrown out
might hold gems
hidden inside
bags
thrown out
might hold gems
hidden inside
bags
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 6 13, 14:51
bags
under
my eyeballs:
they're distracting
you?
under
my eyeballs:
they're distracting
you?
Posted by: Larry Jan 7 13, 10:12
hue
and cry
bemoaning
gravity and
age
and cry
bemoaning
gravity and
age
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 7 13, 16:48
aged
beefsteak
now sizzles
with grilled onions
yum
beefsteak
now sizzles
with grilled onions
yum
Posted by: Larry Jan 8 13, 09:37
Yom
Kippur
is long past
so enjoy the
steak
Kippur
is long past
so enjoy the
steak
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 8 13, 11:13
stake
your tent
with great care;
don't want your stuff
blown
your tent
with great care;
don't want your stuff
blown
Posted by: Larry Jan 8 13, 14:53
blonde
females
stroke their tints
combing out with
wins
females
stroke their tints
combing out with
wins
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 8 13, 17:59
winds
often
blow blonde hair
while the brunettes
watch
often
blow blonde hair
while the brunettes
watch
Posted by: Larry Jan 9 13, 00:51
watch
the wind
reveal roots'
multicolored
shades
the wind
reveal roots'
multicolored
shades
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 9 13, 12:13
shades
of green
disappear
from the winter
scape
of green
disappear
from the winter
scape
Posted by: Larry Jan 11 13, 09:40
scrape
the ice
from windshields
if your heater
brakes
the ice
from windshields
if your heater
brakes
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 11 13, 10:23
brakes
cause spins
on black ice
when you try to
turn
cause spins
on black ice
when you try to
turn
Posted by: Larry Jan 11 13, 16:36
turn
around
and go home
'till ice and toes
thaw
around
and go home
'till ice and toes
thaw
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 12 13, 10:16
thawed
snowball
slowly fades
to a puddled
blot
snowball
slowly fades
to a puddled
blot
Posted by: Larry Jan 13 13, 10:01
blot
ink stain
with oil of
minerals stops
smears
ink stain
with oil of
minerals stops
smears
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 22 13, 14:24
s'mores
will melt
over fire
marshmellowy
choc
will melt
over fire
marshmellowy
choc
Posted by: Larry Jan 22 13, 15:14
chuck
is meat
for the sole
and tough when not
ground
is meat
for the sole
and tough when not
ground
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 23 13, 00:56
grunt
G I ' s
foot the bill
for officers'
will
G I ' s
foot the bill
for officers'
will
Posted by: Larry Jan 23 13, 11:43
wall
of shame
should be built
for officer's
mess
of shame
should be built
for officer's
mess
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 23 13, 11:51
mess
steward
didn't clean
behind himself
flushed
steward
didn't clean
behind himself
flushed
Posted by: Larry Jan 23 13, 17:10
flushed
and faint,
dyslexic
marathoners
carp
and faint,
dyslexic
marathoners
carp
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 24 13, 12:35
park
your car
near the edge
and let the brake
off
your car
near the edge
and let the brake
off
Posted by: Larry Jan 25 13, 00:50
off
with head
for those words
raged the red king
dumb
with head
for those words
raged the red king
dumb
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 25 13, 12:17
dumb
waiter
could not tell
he was going
down
waiter
could not tell
he was going
down
Posted by: Larry Jan 25 13, 15:40
down
from ducks
is earthy
down from giraffes…
mars
from ducks
is earthy
down from giraffes…
mars
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 25 13, 23:17
mars
candy
gives snickers
while milky whey
sucks
candy
gives snickers
while milky whey
sucks
Posted by: Larry Jan 27 13, 23:28
socks
are worn
when skiing
to promote cold
feats
are worn
when skiing
to promote cold
feats
Posted by: JustDaniel Jan 28 13, 09:44
fits
and starts
won't do much
for consistent
work
and starts
won't do much
for consistent
work
Posted by: Larry Jan 28 13, 09:46
work
at what
you enjoy
then it's all just
play
at what
you enjoy
then it's all just
play
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