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[Guest_ohsteve_*]

Hell

Balls of sulpheric fire
in a mottled sky;
clouded with dense
black drifts of acidic smoke.

Red and white hot
molten metals flow;
in streams spitting
with ripples of heat.

Friends and neighbors
you thought you knew;
their flesh burning, cracked,
blood seeping.
Doomed for eternity.

[Guest_Xanadu_*]

I am sorry, but this failed to engage this reader on any level.

[Guest_Don_*]

Hi ohsteve,

This isn't the way Dante saw it.

Reminds me of workers in an open hearth steel mill.

A Pennsylvania or Gary, Indiana neighborhood perhaps.

Don