~~~~~~~~Fourth Revision~~TY Lori and Snow~~~~
Winnie The Pooh's View ...The years went by so fast. I wonder could
it be...you truly have forgotten me?
They sold off every acre of the wood
from where the Woozles weren't to my tree,
then Eeyore's gloomy place - where might he be?
You left me sitting on the windowsill
and promised to return by count of three.
I have awaited your return, but still
no you, though in my heart, I know one day you will.
Chrisopher Robin's point of view ...I miss you silly pooh and if I could
go back in time, I'd carry you with me.
When father took me flying from the wood
-- attending school, far from the Sanderz tree,
it was too quick to say goodbye. A bee
buzzed by and teased outside my window sill
inviting me to stay. I'm grown, with three
kids of my own who haven't met you; still
don't fret, I've left you to them when I wrote my will.
~~~~~~~Third Revision~~~~~~~~~~~
Winnie the Pooh And Christopher Too
Winnie The Pooh's View ...
The years went by so fast. I wonder could
it be...you truly have forgotten me?
They sold off every acre of the wood
from where the Woozles weren't - to my tree,
then Eeyore's gloomy place; where might he be?
You left me sitting on the windowsill
and promised to return by count of three.
I've counted ten so many times and still
no you. But in my heart, I know one day you will.
Chrisopher Robin's point of view ...
I miss you silly old Pooh! If I could
go back in time, I would take you with me.
Yet father flew me...far, far from the wood
to school. He pulled me from the Sanderz tree,
so quick I couldn't say goodbye. A bee
buzzed by today, outside my window sill
reminding me I've grown up now with three
kids of my own; they haven't met you - still
don't fret - I've left them our lagacy in my will...
~~~~~~~Second Revision~~~~~~~~~~
Winnie the Pooh And Christopher Too
Winnie The Pooh's View ...
So many years have passed; I wonder could
it be...you truly have forgotten me?
They sold off every acre of the wood
from where the Woozles weren't - to my tree,
then Eeyore's gloomy place; where might he be?
You left me sitting on the windowsill
and promised to return by count of three.
Although you didn't look behind, I still
continue to believe that one day soon you will.
Chrisopher Robin's point of view ...
I miss you silly old Pooh! If I could
go back in time, I would take you with me.
Yet father flew me...far, far from the wood
to school. He pulled me from the Sanderz tree,
so quick I couldn't say goodbye. A bee
buzzed by and teased outside my window sill
it beckoned me home. I'm grown now with three
kids of my own; they haven't met you - still
our legacy lives - I've left them you in my will!
~~~~~~ First Revision ~~~~~~~~~~~~
Winnie the Pooh And Christopher Too Winnie The Pooh's View ...
The years had passed so fast. I wonder could
it be, you truly have forgotten me?
They sold off every acre of the wood
from where the Woozles weren't, to my tree
and Eeyore's gloomy place. Where might he be?
You left me sitting on the windowsill
and promised to return by count of three.
Although you didn't look behind, I still
continue to believe ... one day you will.
Chrisopher Robin's point of view ...
I miss you silly old Pooh. If I could
go back in time, I would take you with me.
Yet father flew me...far, far...from the wood
to school. He pulled me from the Sanderz tree,
so quick I couldn't say goodbye. A bee
had buzzed and teased outside my window sill
beckoning me; stay. I'm all grown up with three
kids of my own. They may not know you; still
don't worry - I've left them you in my will!
~~~~~ Original Draft ~~~~~~~
Winnie the Pooh And Christopher Too Winnie The Pooh's View ...
The years had passed so fast. I wonder could
it be, you truly have forgotten me?
They sold off every acre of the wood
from where the woozles weren't, to my tree
and eeyore's gloomy place. Where might he be?
You left me sitting on the windowsill
and promised to return by count of three.
Although you didn't look behind, I still
continue to believe ... one day you will.
Chrisopher Robin's point of view ...
I miss you silly old pooh. If I could
go back in time, I would take you with me.
Yet father flew me away from the wood
to tend to school, far from the Sanderz tree,
so quick I couldn't say goodbye. A bee
had buzzed and teased outside my window sill
beckoning me; stay. I'm all grown up with three
kids of my own. They may not know you; still
don't worry - I've left them you in my will!