Hi James,
I don't believe I've read any poems by you before. It's a pleasure to meet you!!
This poem has two very deep statements as far as I'm concerned: The beginning and the end. The middle leaves me uncertain as to meaning. I also think you can probably fine a new title without having to repeat the word "footprints." Personally, when I read free verse I don't enjoy seeing repeated words.
Through the journey of life, our masks may change and distances vary.( Clear and wise first sentence) Equate to the strength of bones("Equate" what exactly to "strength of bones"? Not clear.) and yet, it is in the depth (This line and following lines are profound!) of our footprints, where true salvation remains.(I'd like to change the final line to read "our true mark is made.")
Use or lose! You're the poet and make the final decisions!
Perhaps a title such as "A Life's Value."
Enjoyed the read!!!
Peggy
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