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Senryu, Japanese form: 5-7-5 or less |
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Nov 13 19, 14:41
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udderly confused as to which one contains milk; calves are on all fours
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Nov 19 19, 05:08
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calves are on both legs right between knees and ankles exercise them well
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Nov 23 19, 23:09
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here's a free one, not part of our chain, but I couldn't resist, in prep for operation Monday 6 am:
clearing my conscience with magnesium citrate cheeks become flushed
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Dec 12 19, 00:02
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when cheeks become flushed you didn’t lower the seat; throne into bidet
and to continue the chain
exercise then swell into a muscular man; wait and you gain weight
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Dec 12 19, 03:56
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thrown into bidet could wash off your weight gain? it's a bunch of crap
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Aug 22 22, 20:33
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it's a bunch of crap that I'd describe as sole food; news pundits punned it
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Aug 24 22, 04:35
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pundit Larry punned it when he referred to sole food... crap scraped off his shoe
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Aug 24 22, 15:18
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Scraping off your shoe with extra morae won’t do; an edit is due!
Sorry Daniel, I couldn't help myself from rhyming even though I know Senryu's aren't rhymed.
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Aug 25 22, 06:02
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edit in the dew while all your thoughts are still wet moist lips speak beauty
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Aug 26 22, 20:46
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most lips speak beauty others are scarred by their lies; pucker up and pick
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Aug 28 22, 03:19
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pucker up and pick your guitar with deft fingers you sing so deafly
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Aug 30 22, 15:20
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if you deafly sing get a safe deposit box hide counterfeit notes
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Sep 2 22, 09:35
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his counter-fit notes perfected cabinetry Finnish carpenter
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Sep 2 22, 22:43
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finished carpentry is a wonder to behold; they came, sawed, concurred
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Sep 3 22, 00:28
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conquering the saw magician's wife came out whole 'til death she'll not part
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Sep 5 22, 07:25
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she’ll not part ‘til death then they harvest the organs; her coda plays on
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Sep 5 22, 17:37
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playing on in code she sows deceptive poems I share her cipher
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Sep 8 22, 11:25
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her cipher was shared with some mathematicians; frayed string theory
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Sep 9 22, 18:36
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string the'ry fell flat but doc would string us along wanted us to flail
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Sep 10 22, 10:13
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to fail is wanting to succeed at any cost that’s the price you pay
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