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Sep 10 15, 07:16
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Gerunds live in the present in a simple participle kind of way; possessive words will augment their meaning in redisplay if you understand my speaking, so to say.
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Sep 10 15, 18:52
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From verbs to nouns you’re making except when dealing with nominative case so we shall not be breaking grammatical rules in place and leave English teachers everywhere quaking.
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Sep 11 15, 10:05
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Leave English teachers a loan so they will be able to buy a new home to spend their summers alone or visit the Superdome where English seems a foreign language to some.
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Sep 13 15, 15:14
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English is a foreign tongue and to hear it on the phone, you must press one but I will not be among those people so just for fun I press random numbers until they are done.
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Sep 14 15, 05:26
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I press random numbers till something strikes my mind to help me to recall my PIN (vanishes at will) for debit card at the mall. Why can't I remember something that's that small?
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Sep 14 15, 21:53
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Small numbers won’t come to me but neither do I remember the large ones, they’re gone to the nth degree. In between I know by tons but others will always leave me lost at see.
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Sep 16 15, 04:02
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so you won't be lost at see
seven-eleven format then seven then seven-eleven again becomes a welcome doormat; a-b-a-b-b maintain and you'll stay on track when you your sight regain.
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Sep 16 15, 21:29
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the lone rhea ranger
I think I have regained sight and my brain is operating at its peak but between my eyes you smite me with formats and I seek the beginning of this string and take a peek.
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Sep 17 15, 07:44
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behind the seens
I often peek at the start because I forget things often at my age; I'm not really all that smart and couldn't be called a sage, so I check out the beginning when offstage.
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Sep 17 15, 13:15
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comedy of eras
The stage upon which we play will not ever see a sold out audience to hear what we have to say, which comes in an abundance, and is delivered with some impertinence.
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Sep 18 15, 08:48
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No Disgust
Impertinence is our style delivered even when no one else reads us; we give each other a smile while we hardly ever cuss and it is likely we'll never be discussed.
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Sep 19 15, 23:12
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florid gardens
When discussing diverse forms we’ve delved into idiosyncratic verse, which have challenged all the norms on poetry sites. Mosaic Musings’ curse or blessing is it’s filled with new seeds and corms.
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Sep 20 15, 01:02
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Corm now!
Corm? the rhizome of the site? a big bulb where all the energy is stored? Perhaps we'll flower in spite of the fact that we're all bored? Maybe you or Merlin will strike a bright chord.
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Sep 20 15, 23:31
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greener past yours
If Merlin strikes a bright chord, will I be there to help him in any way or in the cups which I’ve poured bemoaning those who won’t stay believing there is somewhere they’ll be adored.
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Sep 21 15, 07:25
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Loved in Linens
If they'd like to be adored they might just hang around with us for a while and become part of our horde; we would love them without guile and even dress them in linen and argyle.
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Sep 22 15, 12:34
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note to author
Addressed in linen or guile some think good critique is used to criticize and that you’ve placed them on trial but that is just alibis people use when they want you to patronize.
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Sep 22 15, 14:20
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Patron Eyes
You want me to patronize? That was the most intelligent piece ever! It really opened my eyes, and it is very clever; would I change even one word of it? never!
By the way, that's almost what I would have said without patronizing!
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Sep 23 15, 18:15
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alter a shun
“Never change one word of it!” is a critique everyone would like to hear but there’s always a small bit some would modify. I fear that most of their suggestions do not endear.
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Sep 24 15, 00:54
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Peek Speak
Most suggestions won't endear the critiquer to the author that's critiqued; however, the sight-seer with rave review that is sneaked in after two minutes: author's joy is piqued.
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Sep 24 15, 14:47
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valued versus?
The peak of an author’s joy is to be recognized and emulated; a dream since I was a boy. but I guess I am fated to present alternatives to those jaded.
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